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Re: Anyways.........
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Jan 23, 2012 9:43 AM
in response to: Lea Nikkaya
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That Prophetic Dude is not the main character. Blodka is. (There are supposed to be two dots above the 'O') He is part of the Red Guards and Joined with a Death Shade spirit. 'Tis awesome. ;p
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Re: Anyways.........
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Jan 23, 2012 2:19 AM
in response to: armstrong33
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Nah, she's not usually this introspective and deep. In general she's a sarcastic, adrenaline-addicted, dead-aim, sharp-witted, crazy genius with a lightspeed brain and a razor tongue who scares the crap out of the civilian crew with her shenanigans and gives the captain a headache at the best of times. (set his couch on fire because she got bored locked in his office kind of headache.)
In context, She's just shot her friend to save his life( who happened to be the ship's captain and is comatose as a result), and is on the run from the authorities because of it. That always tends to make people a bit melancholy.  In reality, I was trying out a new style of writing.
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Re: Anyways.........
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Jan 22, 2012 4:51 PM
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I suggest you make the character into more of a nihilist. But that wouldent be everyone's opinion. I like my characters nice and shallow, but the next guy probly wouldent say that.
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Re: Anyways.........
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Jan 22, 2012 11:42 AM
in response to: Viruka Core
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Reminds me, I need to finish a chapter.. i've been putting it off for months xD
I could actually use an outside opinion. Anyone up for commenting? Intelligent comments only, please. Maybe that'll knock this frikkin writersblock back where it belongs.
"While adrenaline and survival instinct make it easy to force the guilt back into the corners of my mind, it is the quiet moments that break down any defence one might have in place. As you stand in the dark shadows holding your breath in hiding from another police squad, or sitting alone on a makeshift bed in an abandoned building staring at a blank wall, it strikes at you in another vicious attempt to drag you over the edge of an endless cliff of despair.
There are times when a step forward feels like an impossible feat; when choosing a path is the moment when time itself freezes, only to force reality back home in a terrifying roar, all senses overwhelmed. It is in these moments one is forced to review oneself, to see if one truly has the courage to do that which they know will break them so irreparably; shattering everything they are into a mass of fractured pieces scattered across the definition of a person."
-Personal notes of Col. Aquila Sol, UNSF. May 16 2085.
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Re: Anyways.........
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Jan 21, 2012 5:00 PM
in response to: Lea Nikkaya
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Anyways. . .
Here is a expensive line ;p
I stand here at the crossroads of humanity: I see the Annihilators at one, Saviors, and my death at the middle. I can do nothing but wait for the gods to have mercy on huamity.
Prophetic Andras 6:78
From a story that I am working on. In truth, that just popped out of my head right now. ;p
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Re: Anyways.........
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Jan 20, 2012 7:15 PM
in response to: Lea Nikkaya
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Government Conspiracies aside. . .
Anyways. . .
Huh. . I got no wierd one liners today. Sorry. ;p
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Re: Anyways.........
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Jan 20, 2012 1:56 AM
in response to: armstrong33
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It's hilarious how much governments and anti-piracy organisations are wasting everyone's time. The second you use a proxy, you bypass all blockades... And everyone who has tried to use MSN and Facebook at work or school knows how those work.
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Re: Anyways.........
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Jan 19, 2012 3:35 PM
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Re: Anyways.........
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Jan 19, 2012 2:46 PM
in response to: Viruka Core
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Closest we've gotten to winter here torrential downpour and "Open the floodgates!".
Avatar's scheduled for next week here. It's just glorified CGI Pocahontas. (I love it for the CGI, I absolutelly hate it for the sheer lack of an original plot.) Just finished watching Angels & Demons. (One of the best soundtracks ever; 160BMP by Hans Zimmer.)
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Re: Anyways.........
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Jan 19, 2012 1:42 PM
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Oh is that all?
Anyways . . .
If you want news, I give ya news!
Its snowing good here in the boonies! As in he Temperate zone of the East Coast of USA. Just chillin' and watching Avatar. ;p
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Re: Anyways.........
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Jan 19, 2012 9:32 AM
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No... I'm back.
Fuzzy pickles will never die! They'll just get...uh, fuzzier.
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Re: Anyways.........
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Jan 19, 2012 1:24 AM
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Re: Anyways.........
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Jan 18, 2012 8:22 PM
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Anyways. .. .
Warning: User is experienceing Temporal shifting, caution is advised:
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Re: Anyways.........
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Jan 18, 2012 1:01 PM
in response to: SpongeTom
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And blocking the flashobject in ABP works equally well. I know. That is not the point.
I wholeheartedly agree with their protest against what the rest of the world is calling the american attempt at world domination.
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Re: Anyways.........
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Jan 18, 2012 8:02 AM
in response to: armstrong33
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Right click > View Page Source. The pages aren't actually gone, they're just concealed.
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Re: Anyways.........
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Jan 18, 2012 7:56 AM
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Did you forget Wikipedia is on a 24 hour blackout against the dictatorial SOPA act?
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Re: Anyways.........
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Jan 18, 2012 1:33 AM
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It might be useful to them, perhaps. To those of us who do not have their reference list, not so much.
What are you talking about? Sounds dangerous. ;p
It wasn't really dangerous, lot of flash, very little bang. But it was a bit funny to see Alan do a rolldive off the steps and behind the container when he walked out of the door. It was funnier to find katie hiding inside the broomcloset with a mop.
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Re: Anyways.........
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Jan 17, 2012 8:57 PM
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But the error number lets you look up what sort of error it is if you don't already know. You can learn to understand the difference between say, 503 ("check back here a little later") and 403 ("lol sux 2 b u").
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