ok so they get trapped on an uncharted planet him and the girl,they fend off the first wave of clones the second wave of clones being starkillers or just commandos,they lose later they come steal the girl and somehow , i dont know how yall are going to do this like if that metal stuff that seals people in like they did hon solo meaning im not sure if it makes u not age but somehow they steel starkiller girl, imagine its like a volcano of this liquid metal they can trap people in there a big fight they end up somehow pushing the girl into the canyon of the liquid metal they made liquid with bombs,starkiller trying the pull both the liquid and her up a dark sith makes him jump to the cage as he releases it to falland then the evil starkiller jumps above them and force pushes them down while he pulls a ice bomb to them and explodes all of them as he enters it before

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it happens on that 3 god world from the series

i dont know maybe u can say they went to that planet where the 3 gods were the father the girl and the son that tried to change vaders fate from the animated series clone wars the sith somehow res the god the sith thinking they need the evil borther when they get there the son star killer using there magic to res in the sister by finding her essence, jedi ghost and putting it in the blood both of them trying to control the body and her trying to control her bother afterward working it to somehow getting him liquified or just in a trance of staying young until the seal is broken by luke being alittle too late the goddess ghost only thinking to jump in before her borthers ressurrected and both of them controlling the body

luke finding him later after darth vaders death and jadens saving the house maybe even on any out of reach planet smily face

starkiller not knowing love and only knew insurgents , spys trying to disrupt order and thats why he did it or just doesnt questions things because he doesnt have the idea to ask are u the bad guy or good guy and can even have a gigle from the girl teaching him he doesnt know much

ok so i know some of you might want starkiller to die but what if he never knew good like the word love wasnt in his vocabulary and one day he finally learned the word from the girl could be a little story line of her teaching it to him finally him crying about what hes done to the jedi twilek cuz we all know thats almost why they hate him i dont know some people just connect it as the same person not know the girls death from skywalkers padawon in the animated clone wars series, it might be starkiller killing her i think they look different though so get it together but yea u can have that story of him learning the word love from her or something as they talk about old times on the planet there stuck on before she gets stolen im sure ull put it together i dont know so many ideas i could fit it in even them getting to the story pick please use my story lucas ill love you forever 1

good things about them getting liquified

and if u already made 3 change the ending and make # 4 there tailing him once again this time crashing on a planet

Cheers!

Edited by: Reekardoo on Sep 25, 2012 5:04 AM