“But i do not understand what u mean that its empty the light side ending just continues too the forth movie whats empty about that?”
When I mean it’s empty I guess what we’re trying to say is it’s been somehow already done…that’s why I’d leave a battle between Vade or the emperor out of the game and turn it into a mere cinematic (not quite a duel).
The light end scene of Juno and Galen is pretty much inescapable … As I stated before Juno is the key to this game she is the deus ex machine so she needs no great role but only represent a motif for things to develop…. That’s why I made her a damsel in distress… you too somewhat did the same but with more field interaction of the character but still out of the centre action until the pathos unfolds… that I’m fine with.
But again… the emperor forgiving Vader again(!?)- not plausible… Sith aren’t like that
I’d concentrate on the duel of the clones – that I like a lot!
The emptiness of the story is the lack of continuing drama. In your lightside end the plans go to the rebels (ok!) the emperor and Vader survive (ok!) starkiller and Juno must die(ok) but where’s the good ending? There can never be a truly good ending since the heroes must fall and the plans falling in rebel hands just doesn’t seem to cut it for me… The way I envisioned it works for your story too… you have to make sure Vader comprehends his victory or Starkiller’s defeat is in reality his/the empire’s defeat. Why?
He loses both clones (the chances of facing the emperor with a apprentice he now knows is powerful)
His cloning process is a failure – as do you also state but with different script orientation
His plan to capture the rebels fails – as in your script
But the thing is you don’t mention these. All ends in flames and ….. void….nothing…. In my story there’s the culminating scene… where Vader asserts his defeat in a conversation with a dying starkiller. And by realizing this you give focus to Vader and his confusion… There is still good in him… and for me this is what makes it interesting… starkillers cycle has ended and we know that Luke’s is about to begin… so you see it isn’t so linear. There are a lot of dots to combine with episode IV and not just a major one. I mean it’s more theatrical and not so action oriented… but that’s more to my liking.
P.S. I’d really keep the palpatine out of this…
“Also u didnt answer some of the other questions i asked earlier”
Please point out what I’ve missed.
“In addition i understand ur point on the jedi but i planned too have those jedi dying in the beginning and just gave them names just too give the story more depth u can just imagine a different name and use that name instead instead of mine such as Vaughn and Odin. Further more I want too prove that theory more of yours on the jedi that is why i had them die in the beginning.”
I'll have to check wookiepedia for surviving jedis
“Also i want too ask that did u imagine each scene as u were reading?”
I had to imagine for your description was very thorough… some scenes as I stated before are more videogame oriented (you have a lot of action). I myself was only considering story so it is more dull. And I do agree there’s a “crescendo” in your story but again the end sounds blank… My story isn’t in “crescendo”. There’s a stop when Juno is captured and Starkiller loses his ship – that’s a reflection period that then leads to the dramatic ending – mine isn’t as action packed – true!- mine is more – again – theatrical!
“Furthermore i only had one friend too help me out and only on the missions on Rhen Var and Sluis Van.”
I had no friends helping out – that’s why I made some mistakes.
“I would also like too note that the most complicated seen was the arrest of Star Killer issued by Jedi Master Vaughn Rodan, because when i first wrote it i was my intent was too make that a stealth…”
I didn’t read the rest because you said “stealth”- wouldn’t it be great if the people at Lucasarts would understand how huge that would be? I’ve been wanted to make such a level in a longtime but I guess most players only see action and not the strategy in gaming. Make it stealth and action combination and you have my vote! Metal Star Gear Wars Solid...
I will reply at a later time but i just want too say this I guess i will re post but i wont change it im just going too make it more neat.
However i will say that as for the ending i am proud of the way I ended the lightside ending but I had a little trouble with the dark side ending, because as u read you will notice that i made 2 different darkside ending outcomes after (my favorite) the killing of the clone.
in my endings my favorite scenes would be the death of the clone!
I can understand if people did not like some of the drama scenes example the dath scene with Galen and Juno (even my friends slightly disliked it) but that's how i write all of my death scenes are dramatic.
But i do not understand what u mean that its empty the light side ending just continues too the forth movie whats empty about that?
Also u didnt answer some of the other questions i asked earlier.
In addition i understand ur point on the jedi but i planned too have those jedi dying in the beginning and just gave them names just too give the story more depth u can just imagine a different name and use that name instead instead of mine such as Vaughn and Odin. Further more I want too prove that theory more of yours on the jedi that is why i had them die in the beginning.
Also i want too ask that did u imagine each scene as u were reading?
Furthermore i only had one friend too help me out and only on the missions on Rhen Var and Sluis Van.
I would also like too note that the most complicated seen was the arrest of Star Killer issued by Jedi Master Vaughn Rodan, because when i first wrote it i was my intent was too make that a stealth mission but then the orbital station would have taken too long for game play and no story for u get too play as the clone and escape from the rebels but the clone would not want too disrupt the rebel alliance or Juno. And it did not connect too the other mission i had on Dantooine for the Dark Appprentice then after three days of thinking I decided too scrap it and instead just make it a cinematic scene. Thus it is my most least favorite now because there was no way it could be fixed thus it was just average.
So keep replying and when i repost it in due time.
1 – really, really sorry for not having account… it would really be easier to exchange ideas…
2- You’re research deserves applause – it’s far deeper than mine… I was just looking for a interesting story using the TFU 1 method: use the force; characters from the movies; and closure (TFU3) – I wasn’t thinking videogamewise, just trying to make some sense creating a victory for the empire, setting for episode IV, and still making it a child’stale (as mr.George likes to point out that this is for kids- though I don’t agree) where good prevails somehow.
3- I didn’t think of a dark side ending.
4- I get it you picked every single hint from TFU 1 and 2 and their DLC’s but some things I would leave alone – too be honest it makes TOO much sense in your story, like the DLC’s would be canon though not really…. I don’t know if you follow me. Credible and plausible but still……… I would crave for more … shadowy narrative.
5- Locations: I would just remove the death star…or…may be put it in the start somehow… I’ve just had an idea…the rest of the planets I am very cool with, be it fondor or sluis van!
6- Kota: I get the sacrifice scene (certainly dramatic) but from my perspective you could gain a lot more with his early death (for dilemma’s sake)…. Let someone else do the sacrifice.
7- jedis- You won’t win me on this one though story wise efficient … either bring some jedis already known to be alive at the time or let them remain dead….
8- BOBA – just make him the most badass. More than cad bane, than Durge or even IG-88… He is to hold a great part in TFU 3 if to be made and he musn’t lose. That’s why I too wasn’t too satisfied with the transaction in the millenium falcon I wrote… just an excuse to put lando in corellia… my bad!
9- Your script is GOOD! I have friends in a star wars reading discussion group who have read it and their comment was similar to mine:
It feels like something is missing though we can’t really point it out – the story makes sense despite some of your scenes is not to the liking of some member of the group. The general feeling at the end of the story was like… empty. And for the people in this group TFU3 needs greater closure.
Don’t mean to be disrespectful to your work which great (but not sensational) and my comment on not being starwarsy refelects that and only that. I didn’t mean to offend. I think you can improve it. Don’t think of it as a closed project. keep getting ideas and combining them. You’ll need this craft if you’re to work with a developers Team!
10 - You won’t win me on the theory jedi can’t be cloned either…it is a wonderful universe out there and this goes a little beyond published star wars as I have an unpublished script for legacy era which explains what the force and midi-chlorians are and this is related to my disbelief on your assumption theory…. I might let you know what I think of it since you too are versed in the ways of the force provided you give me an opinion.
11- script repost – It would be good if you could summarize! I took the time to read it but many people won’t… you lose ‘cause of that…. Make a link from the summary to the full script.
12- I requested the people from my discussion group to qualify your script, and here are the results:
- Me: 6.5 out of ten
- 2 (but this guy is an ***)
- 8 (this guy loved it but would have Kota dead earlier and no new jedis)
Average: 6,85 ( I didn’mind the ***)
So you see, it is positive but we expect more. They liked mine better only because of the end and the tiny connection with luke skywalker (we’re all die hard fans of the first trilogy)but I too got only an average 7,4 because of inconsistencies – some of which you pointed out.
13- Grammar: I won’t mind your if you don’t mind mine but if you want to do this right and maybe be professional you’ve got to work by the book. Everything must be perfect!!! I do this for fun but I to would like to be part of a creator’s team. Remember: everything, every single aspect counts on making you different from other writers/developers.
I am glad u agree on some points but it would be easier for me too speak too u directly too explain the main points of my story.
I do understand your point on the gorog and worm it wasn't nessassery however Star Wars is changing and needs too be more exciting.
As for the plot in my story I was trying too make it true too how the original is.
The light side ending or just bringing back the original Starkiller (Galen Marek) was a bit a slap in the face too the audience since the ending is similiar.
However (speaking of which) the way I brought back or how the Emperor revived the original Starkiller in my story is that he found the body of Galen on Kamino (where he so proclaimed he went to see Vader's last where abouts) discovered the ruined base that was caused by the Dark Apprentice found the body of the original (with the power of the force) in some secret chamber. Then the Emperor had the idea of taking vengeance on Vaders betrayel for not disposing his relation to his apprentice (look at the DLC in TFU 2 for example). The Emperor used every bit of technology too bring the original back too life and the power of the Dark side of the force too revive him.(Also I think the original would have too be some how alive but be unconscious and ( story wise in my view: paralyzed and no longer himself unable too move like a vegetable) or his body must be frozen at least because in order too duplicate living cells too clones it has too be alive and not dead. i think in this research in the star wars universe i did not look through very much when i was doing this. Any how when the the original was brought back to life, think of the darkside ending of the first TFU game that way in the book it makes it seem as though he for saw his own life return, but just exclude the part where everyone died in the end the main focus is just on the operation table.
Therefore when he returns as Darth Stalker he was brought back by the dark side of the force and the most advanced technology the Emperor provided in order too dispose of Vader and all of his mistakes, thus if you think about it he became a living corpse of the dark side but is still being used as a puppet as he always was until he freed himself in the very end.
Also too explain the same ending in the lightside of why Vader is still alive is that with the Dark apprentice, the Starkiller clone, and the original Starkiller (Galen) dead the Emperor has no choice but too keep Vader by his side to rule the galaxy and finish the rebel alliance. (re reread the dialogue that was in the this seen and u will notice that there was a foreshadowing moment for episode 6).
i would also like too say that my story was based on variants of a star wars book, game plot, and story cinematic when i was typing the plot in each location. for example The very beginning of the Kamino mission as the Dark apprentice i saw it and typed as more of a cinematic trailer than a real mission. The level at Rhen Var it was like a book and game variant. The Death Star and Sluis Van was more like a novel in my view but with a few game and cinematic points.
I would also like too say that for me having Kota live turned out better than having him die in the beginning. if u noticed there was many opportunities where i could have had him killed.
Because now my most favorite scene is where Kota makes a noble sacrifice on the executor fighting against the dark apprentice. It is too me the best part I wrote even though it seems a little bit similar too how Obi wan sacrificed himself too let Luke escape the death star.
Also about my the Jedi I created i understand your point on that Luke should be the last jedi, but u can interpret his words like that he is the only jedi that can stop the empire (do not include leia in this moment im just trying too get my point across too u). I would also like repeat that no madder on the what jedi I created i would kill them off just too make that statement true that is the reason why I had the Dark Apprentice kill jedi Master Vaughn Rodan and Padwan Odin. I know u do not like the idea of these jedi being in the game however u have too admit that they way I used them was very effective in the story.
Because honestly have u read anybodies story that had so much detail in plot for Star Wars and with an addition too game detail that seems to be the most plusible outcome for the next and last TFU game?
I know what i was doing when I was typing this script I did a lot of Star Wars research if u read my commentary in the script u would have noticed that i wrote i would have used the planet Fondor
but had too replace it with Sluis Van because there was a problem in using it for there was a rebellion...(Your have too look it up because its hard for me too explain it too simply put i Sluis Van in my version was going too be the place where Vader's imperial star destroyer ship the executor was going too be fully completed however in my story that was prevented thus as it is written in the star wars universe the executor was completed on Fondor).
I would also like too point out that Boba is a character that people want too see more of because he is such a awesome character, but gets less screen time in TSWU (The Star Wars Universe) thus having people become more anticipated too see his character. The way I had Boba in my story is the best example (excluding the movies) because he was shown in random scenes which when he appeared makes people want too see him more.
Note that Boba appeared on Rhen Var because he was sent too collect the clones head and his crew and help the empire escort them too there destination too a different planet for execution.
the other scene i am most proud of are the scenes with Boba where he fights against the Dark Apprentice on Dantooine then works together figting against the rebels then leaving Dark too fend for himself. Also the fight with Boba vs the cloned Starkiller on Rhen Var was pretty epic with that falling scene.
U due now that Rhen Var was planet used and only scene in Battlefront write?
I have more too say however typing every thing i want too say is a bit harder too do than speaking too u directly. If i did have time i would make the TFU II DLC script of the scene with Starkiller fighting Maulkiller rather than the Bespin scene scene I did for TFU III. Thus i just want too say that my script too me IS STAR WARS LIKE!
If it wasn't then i would have not spent so much effort and time (free time) on typing it or spending all that time researching every planet and character using every aspect too make each scene effective and true to Star Wars.
Also i due not plan on fixing this because i made every scene plausible and the most likely turn out for The Force Unleashed III to be, the only thing i would due is fix some of the grammer! I would add the shadow troopers and the all the other TFU reused creations however those are not my creations therefore i do not have the right to use those creations. Thats why I created other scenes such as the worm and that new imperial commander guy on Rhen Var and the new Jedi.
Also the Degeneration process of the cloned star killer is too prove the theory that "no one can clone a jedi" and do not give me those references from the books after episode six like how the emperor cloned himself or those two jedi from the battlefront game.
The reason Dark Apprentice is not affected yet is because either the dark side of the force is slowing it down or that because he was just born (look at distant thunder comic) that it has not effected him yet thus he is stronger than the other clone. That is why I had the clone win but lose in the end, but the biggest twist was that DARK was killed by Darth Stalker and then the player would have too instead MAKE a Choice with lighjtside or darkside with the decision made by the emotions of Darth Stalker (Galen Marek).
The way this scenario turned out seemed way better than having the Dark apprentice choose because it just DOES NOT fit his character of a ruthless evil clone on making a lightside choice as other people keep making it end in that fashion in star wars, it just does not work. I thought of scenarios like that back in March or December all the way through May. But then an idea hit me (June 28, 2011, Friday) as i was talking to my friends on xbox about Star Wars and the TFU one ending topic we were discussing and then immediately turned off the xbox went on my computer and started typing because i found a better ending for the TFU III.
Also tell me if you would like me to re post the script in a more neat way such as having the paragraphs not so pact together too make it more read able.
Also when my friends read this and if became the actual game they rated it out of ten: 7/10, 8/10, and 8.5, 8.6, or 8.7 out of 10!
I would like for u to at least tell other people to read my story and tell them to type there opinions and ask if this should become the new game for Force Unleashed III.
2nd – My idea was that Vader had a backup plan should something go wrong with boba fett capturing a rebel leader like let’s imagine they would try to rescue her by following fett back to kamino. Therefore should starkiller defeat him and he was arrested… then boba might follow the rebels to their hidden base and alerting the empire – BOBA is working on Vader’s behalf and not telling the whole story ahead is just a manner or creating suspense or maybe a minor twist in the story: distant thunder is what this is all about. We don’t know anything about it despite he is the original one for me and we don’t need to since he is just a barking dog with a leash – possible to impovement if you want to create some commotion and inner problems – but I think the character in TFU 1 didn’t question Vader before JUNO so she is the key to the story. In TFU 2 he question dead start because of JUNO and the idea was to explain the original is more susceptible to rhe dark side than the clone for we was infused someway with more force power hence he is even more powerful (similar to jedi outcast a few years from the storyline).
3rd – the hidden apprentice is vader’s secret weapon and he only unleashes it in dire need. He has no need for him before he (vader) needs to be released. I agree with it.
He has no need for him to strike the rebel base. Let the empire take care of that: the clone would be destroyed in planetary bombardment as all rebel troops and Vader might have a new card up his sleeve against the emperor. BUT things don’t go as planned and the dark apprentice only surfaces as a BOSS BATTLE on Tatooine.
But I do agree this could be developed maybe creating a new storyline that I however consider to be distracting from a videogame point of view… I really haven’t thought about it but it’s a good idea.
,4th: First off The Underwater scene was a nice. And to top the Gorog make starkiller battle one of those monsters seen in phantom menace maybe in a shadow of colossus way--- why he is fighting?……. really haven’t thought about it… to survive… creatures mind controlled by the empire (too odd)?…. Don’t know
5th - As for the planets I do disagree with the planet I came up with…. We’ve all seen them yeah I agree but it was juast a way to make galaxy mapping sense.
4th: The killing of Kota – he is a general but there are other and perhaps killing him is an opportubity to show more Garm Bel Iblis or some other rebel leader… I really don’t know who but it is just a matter of studying the STAR WARS EU
5th – the cloned starkiller never cared for the rebellion? He gave KOTA coordinates to Kamino!!!! But I understand what you say but I must stand firm in this: either the original or the clone only cared for the rebellion be3cause of JUNO. As I said she is the kay for ending this cycle…. So though he doesn’t want to lead, he just happened to do it naturally – jedi charisma I guess.
6th Where's the emotion and the conflict with himself? with being a clone?
As Kota said it really doesn’t matter at least not until he faces distant thunder in a BOSS Battle and realises there are still clones – than we could have a cutscene invoking kota that comes as a spirit to calm the infuriated clone.
7th the minor stuff:a). Geonosis doesn't make sense in this story at all – as I said galaxy travelling coherence but I too don’t like it.
b). going back to Dagobah makes no sense!
It was an excuse not to go direcly to Dantooine thus ruining vader’s plan.
Any other planet would do if plausible
c). Maris Brood; I like the idea and would be a programmers’ time saver ( substory ending the tragic tale of Maris)
d) other jedis – yes I know there are a bunch of them around but it sickens me the way thay tell luke he is the last of the jedi and for every single new plot story a new one comes alive… I Really hate that. Jedi driven stories were not the base of what made me like STAR WARS in the first place. Yes I know it’s philosophical and fantastic but in proper doses other wise it loses its awesomeness and becomes banal. I’d really suggest in you’re story to come up with another character for plot’s sake.
.Han Solo and the Millenium Falcon – to this I give you credit – but it is still salvageable
8th Boba Fett: thisis a matter of debate: I think BOBA should be ruthless sometime worse than VADER, but thing is lucasarts has benn making this character more friendly… L
BOBA isn’t sociable he just has to make perspective on all sides just like in shadows of the empire comic. BOBA would prefer to let a prey escape than let it fall into another bounty hunter’s hands: that’s a fact! And BOBA is always trying to trick the clone (though not clearly explicated in my summary) don’t get me wrong: I wasn’t writing a mini novel!
Also Jabba technically raised Boba - true… butmoney is money and maybe the scene can be more subtle and BOBA and Jabba are on the same side and there’s another bounty hunter – CAD BANE perhaps – I don’t know. – claiming the bounty. This too is salvageable but I understand your critic
In your story the clone Starkiller is going through a degeneration process of where his body starts getting weaker due to the fact that he is a clone, and his ability with the force speeds up the process and including his age. – WAY TOO METAL GEAR 4 from my perspective. Find another motif.
8th - DS plans
Don’t get me wrong but it’s been used so many time it is almost a STAR WARS cliché. I didn’t said it was wrong just that there is so much trivia around it that I would find another easier and more original way to bind stories. Hey, I too am a critic J
“Furthermore the I did not want or think of the same planets everyone kept declaring that this is the location we go too such as Naboo, Tatooine, Mustafare, Corellia, Hoth, Mon Calamari and etc....”
I totally agree but you must admit some of them are story binding and other planets would only be good in videogame perpective and not plot. So I’m with you on this one but I can’t help feeling, for instance, that corellia is important – and not very explored videogamewise. Oh, and I would abandon the death star… Vader doesn’t want the emperor to know he’s been messing around. The Emperor isn’t as forgiving as VADER.
9th - the giant Worm from episode 5 – that is a nice and great idea but unnecessary storywise just like the gorog – yeah great level and combines with the story but not STAR WARS! – but ok! So fantastic for videogame but … leaves me craing for more in the overall scene.
10th – sorry no PS3 or xbox accounts but I really enjoyed someone criticising my work. It gave a new perpective and opportunity to correct some aspects. As stated before NO PAIN INTENDED J. You’re story as I said is nice but not great. I would make some changes but that is me you’re free to engage my critique as you feel like. You may have a future in videogame industry creating plots and conceiving scenes for a Videogame but in STAR WARS I think you must try harder – Haden is a tremendous producer and look what happened just because TFU2 didn’t live up to the expectations of many avid fans.
This said, I bid you farewell
And wish you luck with your changes (just messing )
Please leave reply if you have anything more to say
I read your script through and im sorry if I offend you in any way but HONOSTLY it was painful to read IT MAKES NO SENSE!!!!!!!!!!
!st off: There was no plan in motion it makes no sense on what the Dark apprentice means because he's not a part of the empire at all, he's only Vader's pawn and does what he orders
2nd: The Dark apprentice wasn't even a main character you just showed him breifly 2 times before the ending. I can understand on why the Dark apprentice was or can only be used in the beginning, however the way you just made him vanish from the story doesn't connect to how he got to the middle, where/what he did from the middle to the end.
3rd: First off The Underwater scene was a nice Idea because anyone would like to look outside and see the water and see the creatures swimming about, however Naboo is already controled by the Empire, and even a riot wouldn't work because Naboo is the second planet that the Empire took control of after they took Corasaunt and purged Kashyyk.
4th: The killing of Kota, I have also thought of killing Kota in the beginning myself during the break out of Vader. However WITHOUT KOTA there is no general for the Rebels to follow as a leader. This is because THE CLONED STARKILLER is not fit to lead yet because he only has thoughts of Juno he never cared for the rebelion unlike the ORIGINAL STARKILLER who cared about it in the end when he felt like he was his own person after Vader betrayed him again. He's only in the rebellion because Juno is in the Rebellion. Also Kota was the only thing that kept Starkiller feeling as if he was the ORIGINAL STARKILLER. With Kota out of the way what's the point of keeping that thought? because Juno knows that the CLONED STARKILLER is a clone and not the ORIGINAL.
5th THE CLONED STARKILLER: Where's the emotion and the conflict with himself? with being a clone? because he should've realized in the beginning that the instant (Even in your version, even though you didn't type it) Starkiller would've seen the Dark Apprentice and realized that he may be a clone himself because technically they would've met during the attack since VADER was aboard THE SAME SHIP.
6th the minor stuff:a). Geonosis doesn't make sense in this story at all, b). going back to Dagobah makes no sense! THERE IS NO REASON TO EVEN GO BACK TO DAGOBAH!!!!!! c). Maris Brood; I thought about bringing her back but she really isn't an important character. I've had ideas, but it just doesn't work. Also there are other Jedi that went missing that have not been mentioned, seen, or shown that survived the purge of the Jedi temple. such as Starkiller's Father, Kota, Maris Brood, and Kasdin Poradus; no one knew who these characters were until the first game.
7th timeline: This is supposed to be one year before a new hope, and the time in my story lasted in that one year prior to episode 4 and led to episode 4 as well. Han Solo had the Millenium Falcon for more than one year in fact the force unleashed 2 was in the year 1 BBY (Before the Battle of Yavin 4) Han solo acquired the ship in the year 5 BBY. Also Han and Lando became friends after Han won the Falcon from Lando in a Race.
8th Boba Fett: The way you portray Boba Fett did not seem like Boba Fett. Boba is a quiet in the shadows the way you portray him is a social type of person. The way you made the scenes with boba was just ridiculous to the point where no words can describe this atrocity. Also Jabba technically raised Boba since he was a boy somewhere later in time after he escaped from Corasaunt Jail in The Clone Wars, so Jabba would'nt double cross him since Boba is Jabba's right hand man. Also BOBA HELPING STARKILLER ESCAPE???!!! Boba wouldn't help THIS STARKILLER because he gets in the way of his business. In my version the only reason why he aided the DARK APPRENTICE was because it would've made his job easier to get around the Rebel base on Dantooine and the Space station above it.
9th: My Version, In my story the clone Starkiller is going through a degeneration process of where his body starts getting weaker due to the fact that he is a clone, and his ability with the force speeds up the process and including his age. This is because no one can clone a jedi and dont give me that story thats from battlefront with those two brother cloned jedi i know what happens i have done my research. AS for your reply from lethal alliance on the death star plans i just want u too know that there were other ways in gaining the imperial plans from the death star such as the character from jedi outcast kyle katarn. Thus there were different imperial records of the death star plans that each person obtained. Also i did not appreciate that you had Juno act like a captured princess throughout your story it was not star wars like at all. Furthermore the I did not want or think of the same planets everyone kept declaring that this is the location we go too such as Naboo, Tatooine, Mustafare, Corellia, Hoth, Mon Calamari and etc.... I only used planets that were more likely to have been used and a reason too go there, these would have been planets that have rarely been seen, heard and used in the star wars universe besides (Dantooine and Kamino): such as Sluis Van, Rhen Var, and the Death Star (again). Even though I used a more space station and ships my story balances out. Also I added a creature that is rarely seen (the giant Worm from episode 5) in the star wars universe the reason was that me and my friend could not think of any star wars creature topping that Gorog from the second game for each force unleashed game has a giant creature.As for my new jedi characters i added them because that was the best part of the first game and that is what the second game lacked thus i found a way too make the game efficient enough to use these characters for a short time thats why i killed them in the beginning and i even gave them a background story. Even my version of Boba was true too his character! I portrayed each character on how their personalities are in the story making them true to their character on how they are in the original star wars universe. Therefore no offense i find my version to be more plausible and believable to become the Star Wars Force Unleashed III story.
If u have a problem or want too discuss more about it tell me your xbox live account or ps3 account and i will talk too u personally and discuss further on why my story makes more sense.
read it all the way... but it doesn't feell starwarsy to me. It would be a great story for a video game but not star wars...
I don't like this new jedi you've com up with and the final duel with the emperor are not to my liking.
oh, and there are many inconsistencies with the story where Leia gets the plans of the Death Star - i've played lethal alliance and it has some descrepancies with overall EU star wars.
I think TFU 3 must be the end of a cicle where everything ends.
I don't know if you've read through my story but here is what I think the Highlights are:
wide range of planets - though not to happy with naboo... just to make sense regarding the galaxy map
charachters from previous episodes meet their fate (sub-stories also end)
resemblance with star wars stories yet remaining original though it is always about good and evil
the end (it is the twist by itself) Vader's victory is his defeat - and this is what made me proud of my story...
embracing characters from the movies.
if you haven't read mine I'll leave here a summary and please let me know what you like and dislike.
Juno and Starkiller leave Kamino... Fett follows
Meanwhile Vader's apprentice comes out of hiding and releases his master:
"The plan is in motion,,, now we will know the location of the rebels' secret base"
Vader kills all rebel troops and confronts Kota which is killed.
Starkiller however isn't going to Dantooine... He plans to revisit a little green friend on Dagobah for he feels there's more to him than meets the eye.
But when they come out of Hyperspace Fett jumps on them and fires against the Rogue Shadow.
Juno and Starkiller realize they've been followed and need help but can't risk exposing the Rebellion
Boba Fett realizes his attack was precocious and warns Vader
Vader warns him that failure is not an option.
Juno and Starkiller make a desperate jump to a nearby planet where allies can be found and they can repair their ship: first to Sullust and then Naboo - check the galaxy map
Starkiller lands on Theed knowing that the local government does not support the empire. He must contact them and ask for help. He thinks he has lost the bounty Hunter but he has not.
Boba warns Vader
Vader having sensed the odds of such an occurrence after Boba’s communication had dispatched a battalion from Geonosis to Naboo.
Starkiller fights his way through imperial troops only to find the Queen of Naboo had been murdered and a Moff had taken her place.
Starkiller defeats the Moff (bossbattle) but neglects to protect Juno who is captured by Boba Fett .
Starkiller sees Slave 1 leaving the planet
With Theed overrun and the Rogue Shadow lost Starkiller’s only way out is Otoh Gunga
In Otoh Gunga he is taken to the current boss. He demands Starkiller to leave the city wanting no trouble with the empire.
Starkiller asks for a ship to leave but his request is denied. He is given an ultimatum: one day to leave Otoh Gunga or they would turn him to the Empire.
That night Kota comes to Starkiller in his Dreams and tells him not all is lost for he still has friends in the galaxy. He tells he should save the light in his heart for a darker hour approaching.
That same night Starkiller plans an assault to the starport in oder to retake the Rogue Shadow
Starkiller manages to reach the ship but is stopped by Vader and a captive Maris Brood (captured by shadow guards on Felucia)
Vader tells her that if she can defeat Starkiller he would spare her and even take her up as his apprentice
Maris seeing her power is lesser to Starkiller and realizing that the dark side would only be an even worse prison than Felucia asks him for forgiveness and turns on Vader giving Starkiller a chance to escape.
Maris is Killed by Vader.
Starkiller leaves for Alderaan wondering if Bail might know where Juno might have been taken.
He tells him that he doen’s t knowbut might know someone who does: Jabba the Hutt.
Starkiller leaves for Tatooine
When approaching Tatooine, Starkiller loses control of the Ship due to a sand strom. The Rogue Shadow falls. Surprisingly, Starkiller survives the crash but is injured. He crashed near a moisture farm and feels Vader’s presence but at peace… he doesn’t understand and feels confused and asks Kota for help. But he is only met with the presence of a young couple of farmers holding child by the hand.
They offer him aid and a ride in a turbocycle hoover to mos eisley. He thanks them and glances back at the young boy… knowing the future will never be the same.
Starkiller forces an audience with Jabba. Meeting does not go well but. Boba is present and asks for Strakiller’s arrest. He promises to split the bounty with Jabba. ButJabba wants it all to himself. Battle with several bounty hunters and rancors. Eventually it is Boba who helps Starkiller to escape but only because he’d prefer to let him escape rather than be captured by someone else.
Starkiller sees a chance to reach for Juno
He confronts Boba (boss battle)and wins. He has a deal for him. If he took him to Vader he could collect his reward and then leave. He had no quarrel with him. A mutual benefit for both.
Boba reluctantly accepts but warns him they can’t leave in his ship for “fellow” bounty hunters would be surveilling slave 1 trying to snatch the catch of the day from Boba.
Boba introduces Starkiller to a young merchant/gambler Lando Calrissian: he would take him offworld in the Millenium Falcon for a fee… Starkiller uses persuasion
But a dark hooded man (the apprentice) appears and gives chase to Starkiller.
After a fight that Starkiller loses, he is force to flee.
When all seemed lost the Millenium falcon appears flying next to Starkiller that with the help of force jump makes it to the entry platform… therefore escaping
The Millenium Falcon docks with Slave 1 on the arranged coordinates and starkiller pretends to be Boba’s prisoner… once he knows where they are going he smashes some of slave 1’s circuits and jumps back into the millennium falcon.
They fly to Corellia.
In Corellia, Starkiller needs to infiltrate The Imperial Governor’s Hall.
Lando offers help and finds a young imperial cadet Han Solo that has been tempering with security access cards. Lando befriends Han which through some more force persuasion offers the clearance security cards.
Starkiller says goodbye to them both. Both are unaware and don’t realize the Force has messed up with their minds despite being strong willed…
Starkiller pushes through the imperial building until reaching the top where Vader awaits with Juno in custody. As long as she lives I will control you…
From the Shadows the dark apprentice appears.
Who is he? –Starkiller asks
Vader - He is you… you are him… But he was first… you are but a replica… a clone…Kill him
Yes master – the dark apprentice replies.
But Juno stands in the way
To Starkiller –You can’t kill him! He is…you! He saved us all…H has just forgotten it… we can bring him back
Starkiller – Are you saying you believe this lie?
Juno –I don’t know what to think… but Vader is the only real enemy here…
Starkiller – Juno, stand aside….
Juno-I can’t…. I love him…you
Starkiller feels confused and is nearly losing it when he remembers Kota’s words. He holds on to the light and casts away all his demons. Be it true or a lie he must rescue Juno…
But in that moment the apprentice strikes Juno from the back (Vader style)… don’t hold back … brother…
Starkiller wins with force lightning but is near death. He stands to fight Vader but the dark Lord cuts his Lightsaber in two… Starkiller kneels before him… feeling beaten and tired.
Starkiller- Is it true…? Am I a clone…?
Vader- Yes…. But infused with more force power than the original… It seemed however this made you resistant to the seduction of the Darkside as you clang to memories that where not your own. They were his (pointing to the deceased body of the real Starkiller).
Starkiller – Then it seems I have won…
Vader – Won?
Starkiller –Your cloning process is a failure… the rebellion is growing… and you can never again control me…
Vader stops to admire his total defeat.
Starkiller drags himself near to Juno’s body and holds her. He kisses her but her soul had gone to the force already.
Starkiller,coughing and nearly dying, turns to Vader:
I have seen your future. You will destroy the emperor.
Vader-Yes… I have forseen it.
Starkiller- You don’t understand… There’s still light in your heart
Vader- (breathes) no … it is…too late
Image fades to blackness
Starkiller’s voice- No I’ve seen it... ... ...him ...…
…and it shines bright!
Vader breathes heavily
I understand your point however finish reading the story and you will understand! One i made seem as though Vader had know idea where he was taken, and even if he did There would have been nothing he could do about it. Furthermore the Dark Apprentice (Dark) just wiped everyone out thus making it an abandoned base (in my version)! In addition Dark and Boba have no need too tell Vader were he was taken because it has know meaning for he was freed in the end.
Note: the way i had this script was a lot better before i posted it because know its not very neat!
So keep reading this story it makes sense and tell more people too read it because I might not keep it up for long!
Hi there. I've also created a story for TFU III - check it out in the forums.
Your story is quite complex but I stopped reading it when you reach Dantooine.
For me Dantooine is a secret well kept from the Empire. In the Movies Leia reveals Dantooine as the secret rebel base trying to save Alderaan. Moff Tarkin didn't know there was a base there and that by the time the empire got there it had been abandoned. So for me... Dantooine is to be merely a reference and not a place any agents of the empire might realize it was a hiding port for the alliance.
let me know if you agree or have an explanantion (since I didn't read it through thoroughly) and please leave your remarkson my forum TFU III - The Force Unleashed3 (story) - I have it summarized.
Instead of having multiplayer I think there should be a survival mode for each Starkiller's style where you can kill as many enemies as the player wants, but they have to survive the horde of stormtroopers.
NOTE: FOR THOSE that have read the script you may have noticed that the shadow guards are missing, I did this on purpose for I believed that those creations belonged to the real creators. THUS this story would have been longer if i added the other creations of the TFU Universe!
Furthermore the only reason I posted this was because I have found no other way to show my work and for these past 3 or 4 months have been deciding on whether I should wait until I get out of high school and see if I can get an internship or just post it and pray it gets taken down thus telling me they have seen it. THESE MESSAGES WILL BE TAKEN DOWN AT A LATER DATE!
WARNING: THIS IS NOT AN OFFICIAL SCRIPT BY LUCAS ARTS! THIS IS A SCRIPT I HAVE MADE AND THOUGHT ABOUT FOR HALF A YEAR since DECEMBER 28 2010 and started it on Friday JUNE 28 2011 at 7:15 P.M and finished at exactly 4:13 A.M. I Have updated this script since and finished it with 40 pages of story and 4 pages of commentary at the end thanks to the help of one of my friend on August 11 2011! (Note: Please excuse the grammar when reading this! ALSO IF A PERSON FROM LUCAS ARTS IS READING THIS TAKE THIS POST DOWN IMMEDIATELY). IF this post has not been taken down I will be taking it down at a later date. Also I have proof of doing this script i have recorded a video of me and my script so DO NOT TAKE MY WORK AND POST IT IN OTHER FORUMS THIS IS PURE SPECULATION NOT OFFICIAL! AND NOW FOR WHAT YOU HAVE ALL BEEN WAITING FOR:
Star Wars: The Force Unleashed III
Ever since I finished Force Unleashed 2 on 10/29/10 I have had this entire story for the third game in my head over the months. I’ll just explain the general idea to starting off with:
Main Title Description:
A long time ago in a galaxy far, far away…. The successful Rebellion invasion on Kamino lead to the capture of the ruthless tyrant Darth Vader who was defeated by his cloned apprentice General Starkiller, with Vader’s capture the rebels turn the tide of the war as Vader is transferred to Dantooine to be held in a secure prison a way from the Empire. Even though Starkiller feels his grip on Vader diminishing, General Rahm Kota can sense Starkiller is troubled even with the stillness in the air. Even though he senses a bit of joy in being reunited with his old partner Juno Eclipse, he is unable to shake the feeling of the dark side surrounding him creeping in the shadows and even in the most unexpected places.
First scene takes place on Kamino; ships are leaving, ships being repaired, and as the camera goes into the base, after passing by guards walking down halls, it goes into a dark room. It shows a shadowed figure levitating off the ground. The camera angle focuses into a close-up view on his left eye. As it opens it revealed a blood red and streaming tainted yellow eye. The shadowed figure walks down the corridors two rebel guards stand watch. He walks towards the guards watching outside the control room. They looked confused but let him past, the officer in the control room tells the hooded man, “Sir just remember that every one on base has to leave and head back to HQ, for there is no reason to stay here any longer, and that includes you.” The hooded man doesn’t show any response and continues walking. He walks into the control room; sees another entrance to the room, and about 35 rebels working on monitors, and decides to step toward an unoccupied panel to find information about where they were taking Darth Vader. The commander talks to one of his informants, then looks over at the hooded man, and tells his subordinate to get back to his post. Curious about what the hooded man was up to, the commander then looks over his shoulder, then he lifts his left hand, and as he’s about to touch him, he says “Sir those codes are…” (Chocking sound) The Hooded man sharply turns around force choking the commander. The other 34 people focus their attention on the hooded figure and stare at him with a blank, fearful look in their eyes. The guards at the door then turn around, see the situation, and start firing their blasters. The hooded man then moves his right hand, uses the commander like a shield, and throws him at the guard on his left. The guard then turns toward his right and sees the commander fly toward his partner, and knock his partner over. Rebel guard turns back toward the room; however he doesn’t see the hooded man. Then in a flash the guard turns back to the right, but the hooded man was already next to him. Before the guard could even fire his blaster the hooded man grabbed his right arm and pushed the guard’s arm inward with his palm. Then the hooded man grabbed the back of the guard’s head and smashes him to the ground. While all this is happening the 34 other people frenzy toward the other door, and the one informant that spoke to the commander last, was the first one to leave the room, and went to sound off the alarm. Then the hooded man picks up; the two guards as well as the officer, and throws them at the frenzied rebels which started a domino effect. The camera focuses on the hooded man as he uses force lightning on the entire room. Then an explosion erupted on the other side of the door, and the hooded man just walks away as fire spreads behind him. As the alarm sounds the hooded man walks past a squadron of rebel’s while the over-com announces “Intruder Alert” repeatedly. The hooded figure enters the hanger area the squad he passed by returns to him with the informant, pointing to the hooded figure. The hooded man slowly turns around and lifts his head. The soldiers look at the figure with shock, for they thought they were looking at Starkiller. (This Starkiller was the perfected clone that Vader created known as The Dark Apprentice). The Dark Apprentice then takes out his lightsaber and holds it in a reverse grip defends himself from blaster fire as he steps back further into the hanger. The Dark Apprentice holds his lightsaber in reverse grip, in his right hand, as he’s defending himself. He force pushes the rebels with his left hand. He then turns around and sees that the rebels in the hanger start to rush him. The Dark Apprentice detaches his robe (with the hood still attached to his head connected to his shoulder vest) shrouds himself around it as the blasters fire the robe is torn into pieces, but The Dark Apprentice was nowhere to be seen. All of a sudden a rebel pointed to the ceiling as everyone looked up they see the Dark Apprentice in the air and swiftly charges toward the ground and as the rebels back away from the direction he targets, he makes a dent on the ground as he lands. More troops come through the door behind him, as the camera closes in on the Dark Apprentice lifts his right hand holding his ignited lightsaber in front of him he ignites a second part of his blade making a double-bladed lightsaber. The rebels then unleash a fury of blaster fire at him, however The Dark Apprentice charges at the rebels in front of him as he slashes his surroundings of rebels he force repels them out of his way. Then a rocket is fired at him, he barely dodges it and as the second shot is fired he smashes the ground with his left hand using the force and the impact lifts the platform blocking the impact of the rocket. The Dark Apprentice force pushes the lifted platform wall toward the rebels, the rebels tried to flee but it was too late they were crushed by the platform. The Dark Apprentice then turns around and walks away then all of sudden a shot was fired and flew past the Dark Apprentice, which was aimed at the door. The Dark Apprentice turns around and sees the informant that sounded the alarm in a prototype rebel machine. He sees the informant preparing to fire, as the machines right arm blasters a volley of rapid fire the Dark Apprentice charges in and dodges left to right. The Dark Apprentice closes in; he jumps on top of the machines right arm and leaps over it. As the Apprentice lands on the ground behind the machine he turns and throws his lightsaber cutting through the machines right arm. The informant covers the demolished arm with his left as if he was actually in pain. While the Apprentice grabs his lightsaber retuning to him the machine turns around and with its left arm fires 6 missiles at the Apprentice. Using the force the Apprentice stops the missiles dead in their tracks he then force pushes them in the opposite direction. The missiles swiftly charge at the machine and on impact the machine explodes. The Apprentice looks at the wreckage of the machine and walks away. The Apprentice makes it outside the Hanger the rain falls hard and through it a small shuttle falls to the ground. Rebel soldiers run out of the shuttle stunned by the wreckage of the base only seeing the Apprentice walk up to them they take out their blasters and prepare to fire at the Apprentice. However, the Apprentice just waves his hand and says “Your services are no longer needed” the rebels lower their weapons and say “We are no longer needed!” Then on both sides the rebels jump off the platform down toward the crackling waves of the endless ocean. The Apprentice then walks into the shuttle and heads toward the main flag ship in space. In the main room the rebels are trying to get feed back on the situation, but retrieved no answer from ground units. All of a sudden the door opens and The Dark Apprentice walks into the room. The commanding officer walks toward the Apprentice, but just before he could even say anything the Apprentice waves his left hand saying “You will make this ship head toward the Dantoine system.” The captain responds “Yes sir” Still waving his hand he says “You will also ignore and forget my presence on this vessel” The captain responds again while saluting “Understood” As the captain turns back toward his crew he gives the coordinates toward Dantooine. The Apprentice turns around as he walks out the door he makes a sneering grin. The camera then shows the exterior of the ship go into hyperspace leaving the planet Kamino in ruin. (Note this could also be used for trailer).
The next scene shows a rebellion space transport command center above Dantooine, Starkiller (the good clone), Kota, Juno, and two new Jedi: Master (Name: Von Rodan) and Padwan (Name: Odin Vantor) along with the other rebel leaders’ (Bail Organa, Mon Mothma, Bel Iblis) in holograms, one of which PROXY is projecting (Leia Organa) are discussing the next course of action. Then a report came in stating that the last Rebel Cruiser from Kamino has approached orbit, however the officer tells the Generals that the ship is not responding to its com channel. Kota feeling uneasy went to the com and sent a message to the ship saying “This is General Rahm Kota if any one is there please respond” but no answer. Starkiller then felt a disturbance in the force, then something unexpected happened all of the ship’s escape pods launched; three of them heading toward Dantooine. The Rebel ship then seemed to have launched its plasma cannon at the station however what everyone failed to notice was that it was Slave 1 that launched a sonic bomb. The blast from the shock wave destroyed part of the stations communication within the Dantooine home base. Then a sudden explosion erupted with in the ship and its rubble fell down into Dantooine’s atmosphere the entire crew aboard the orbital station, were stunned by the sudden devastation. Kota being cautious tells everyone to get communications back online and send a message to Dantooine to transport Vader immediately; Kota also sent Master (Von Rodan) and Padwan (Odin Vantor) with a small reconnaissance troop to retrieve anything they can find from the ships wreckage floating in space. Suddenly, Starkiller felt something; a sudden pain in his head affected him as if his head was being split in two. Juno then walks toward Starkiller as he fell down on his knees asking “Are you alright?” Starkiller feeling the pain lessen responds slowly says “Yeah…I’m fine.” As the emergency message to Dantooine was sent only one response was sent in but the message was scrambled “We…are …under … code…acknowledgment…transporting prisoner…emergen-” transmission was lost and Kota felt uneasy. Then the reconnaissance team returned and surrounded Starkiller and arrested him for suspicion of treason. Starkiller went along to discover why and prove his innocence. The evidence that made the suspicion was a damaged video recording that was found in the wreckage above the planet. The Jedi Master (Von Rodan) told his underling to play the recording showing the deaths of every one on board being killed by a hooded man with a very similar fighting style of Starkiller’s. Juno vouched to defend Starkiller saying that it couldn’t possibly be him, PROXY even tried to help saying “It couldn’t possibly be my Master, I should know since I helped train him over the years I know all his combat maneuvers. However their fighting styles do look very similar and could even pass as an identical copy it may even be… (Gasp)! Oh Master it could be that it is you and -” Juno and Starkiller interrupted him saying “PROXY!” PROXY coming back to his senses said “Oh! Sorry Master I got carried away in my analysis.” Kota then stepped forward frustrated said “We do not have time accusing one another right now are priority is to find out what’s happening on the ground so all we can do is wait by being calm and patient. Furthermore I trust the boy so release him!” A rebel released Starkiller from his cuffs, Kota continued “Who ever this attacker may be we have discovered a new formidable foe.” Everyone then leaves the room, but Starkiller senses that a far more sinister plot is about too take place very soon.
Mission 2 - The Dark Apprentice arrives on Dantooine from the escape pod, failed to further disguises himself as General Starkiller due to his own predicament in forcing his way through the front door making himself appear as an enemy. After the Apprentice finished cutting his way through the main hall more rebels started to appear on the upper floor and the automatic turret blasters start to fire. The Apprentice dodges and takes cover behind a narrow wall and just as the turrets stopped firing he dashed and threw his lightsaber toward the turret on his right destroying its cannon. The Dark Apprentice charges at the turret on his left he retrieved his lightsaber and jumped on top of the turret and struck it with lightning. Then a sniper bullet was fired the Apprentice jumped of the turret onto the upper floor narrowly dodging the sniper bullet. The rebels fire their blasters the Apprentice reflects the blaster fire with his lightsaber and then uses the force to pull the rebel sniper right into his lightsaber and flings him off straight into the rebels in front of him. Dark (Dark Apprentice Starkiller clone) charges in he grabs the top of the head of one of the rebels that was nearly about to stand he injects him with electricity then hurls him toward the reinforcement below that are trying to repair the turret. As Dark hurled the rebel toward the troops below he used force push. Then the electrified body of the rebel made impact on the turret; sparks flew in the air enhancing the conducted electricity making an explosion. Dark then walks away and continues forward crossing the stone bridge. As Dark runs across the bridge he failed to notice the armed motion detonators behind him and the bridge collapsed below him. While Boba Fett steamily walks across the bridge he noticed small pebbles was falling next to him as the ground started to slightly quiver. Boba looked up and saw huge chunks of the demolished pieces of the bridge two floors above crush on top of one another. Boba remarks “Well that can’t be good” Boba jumps off the bridge just before it got crushed and uses his jet pack to dodge the debris nearly making his destination toward the platform. Suddenly something landed on him forcing a minimal crash landing as Boba rolled; he got up on his feet, he looked and saw what had hit him it was the Dark Apprentice. Boba quickly pulled out his blaster without hesitation because to him the Dark Apprentice looked like Starkiller. Boba fired rapidly at the Apprentice. Dark swiftly rolled to his feet and ignited one part of his lightsaber to deflect the rapid fire. Boba then hurled a thermal detonator at Dark and flew into the air with his jet pack. Dark deflected the detonator using force push with his lightsaber, swings it upward. Boba managed to fly behind Dark, but just before he could even fire Dark swiftly turned around and gripped Boba with the force and pulled him back down onto the platform. Dark then uses force choke on Boba lifting him off the ground while choking him to death, however Boba secretly dropped a thermal detonator which rolled toward Dark. Dark forcing to release Boba from his grip he shielded himself from the blast and just as the smoke cleared it turned into a stand off. Boba with his blaster out and Dark with one part of his lightsaber activated ready for another round, however the door opens and 12 rebel troops have their guns ready and pointed out. Boba and Dark stare back at each other; then stare at the rebels, and then back to each other again the rebels open fire. With Boba on the offense firing his blaster rifle and Dark on the defense using his lightsaber to deflect blaster fire they were both in sync as if they had worked together before. Shots continue to fire; Dark managed to use force push but only on a few, then Boba threw smoke grenades and ignited his flamethrower scorching the rebels through the smoke. As the smoke nearly begins to clear more rebels rush in and start firing. Boba then remarks “I’ll leave this too you.” Boba then flies of in his jet pack just before the Dark Apprentice could do anything about it he is forced to defend himself against the oncoming blaster fire. Now with Boba gone Dark jumps into the air and slams into the ground forcing the rebels off their feet. Then he ignites the other side of his lightsaber making it double-bladed and swiftly decapitates the rebels. Dark now continued down the corridors, but is confronted by the rebels’ last line of defense. Dark grins for he knows they are no match for him he dashes in with his double-bladed lightsaber, and with little effort kills the rebels one by one. Suddenly, Dark is fired upon in three different angles by mounted turrets. Dark charges and leaps into the air throwing his lightsaber toward the one on his left, and as he is in the air he force pushes the rebel on his right off the turret. Even though Dark may have dismounted the blaster turrets he is faced with the rebel mounting the blaster cannon. Dark dodges to his right to avoid the cannon fire; then unleashes a storm of lightning on the cannon. Then the last remaining rebels unleash a hail storm of blaster fire and thermal detonators. Dark using the smoke from the explosive detonators as cover; uses the force to lift the two mounted turrets, and has them automatically fire at the rebels. Then he force levitates the blaster cannon, and uses force lightning to charge its power unleashing a devastating blow. The rebels barely able to move refuse to stay down; thus Dark decides to send them an early grave by using the force to make the ceiling collapse on them. Now with nothing standing in the Apprentice’s way he strolls onward to be reunited with his master. Dark managed to get to Vader’s holding cell, however when he forced open the door and entered the room, Vader wasn’t there. Suddenly, the energy shield doors activated making the Apprentice trapped inside. The room is then filled with a surge of electricity generating from the conductors that popped up from the ground. The electricity travels from one conductor to the next, bringing Dark to his knees screaming in pain. Enraged the Dark Apprentice levitates; enshrouding himself with the force along with his own force lightning. Dark then unleashes his power combining force repulse and force lightning short circuiting the conductors, and tearing the room apart. Dark gets to his feet; closes his eyes, concentrates using the force, and senses his master’s whereabouts. Dark rushes to the top and heads toward the hanger, but he was too late Vader was already aboard the transfer ship headed toward the space station. The Dark Apprentice missed his chance to free his master, suddenly Boba Fett showed up on the scene appearing from the burning demolished ruble that the Dark Apprentice caused in his conquest. Dark ignited his lightsaber preparing to fight: Boba quickly pointed his rifle at Dark. Boba however stated “Now hold on lower your weapon I’m not here to fight with you right now I just want to talk” as Boba lowers his rifle, Dark then disengaged his lightsaber and asked coldly “What do you want?” Boba response “First off I know now that your different from the other one” Boba continuing says “Second we may have our own reasons into going after Vader and setting him free” The Apprentice remarks “And your point is?” Boba tries persuading Dark by asking “Why don’t we work together since you seem to easily get through their defenses?” The Apprentice gives Boba a curious yet unappealing expression. Boba continues “Listen! If you team up with me I’ll be damaging their support while you severely diminish their front lines, that way we can ensure that the rescue will become a success…What do say?” The Dark Apprentice respons coldly “Do as you please” Thus the alliance with Boba Fett and the Dark Apprentice work together to ensure freeing Darth Vader.
Mission 3 - Slave 1 fights its way towards the space station hanger. As Slave 1 gets through the docking bay the rebel troopers prepare to fire. Dark jumps out of Slave 1 and uses mind trick to force the rebels to fight the next incoming wave of rebel reinforcements. After Boba and Dark cleared the docking bay Boba suggested to the Apprentice that they should take different routes to free Vader. Boba stated that he’ll destroy their communication and power, while Dark takes the direct approach demolishing the rebel forces. Dark makes his way down the hall; for every rebel squadron that tries to stand against him he manipulates them with mind trick and orders them to kill all enemies that stand against him. While all this happens the scene changes back to the hanger with Kota, Starkiller, and the two new Jedi. They are briefed by Juno on the scanners which appear to show two intruders in different locations. One intruder heads toward the midlevel for the communications, while the other heads toward the lower deck. Kota then say’s “All right then Starkiller you and I will go after the intruder heading toward the communication, while Master (Von Rodan) and his Padwan (Odin Vantor) go after the intruder heading toward the lower barracks.” Starkiller feels uneasy for he senses that Vader is near, but brushes it off as he walks away. Kota then tells Master (Von Rodan) and Padwan (Odin Vantor) that they should guard Vader’s cell for he felt that this attack wasn’t random. Scene changes back to the Apprentice manipulating more rebels to do his bidding. He finally makes it to the lower barracks where he was confronted with by two AAC-1 hover tanks. One of the AAC-1 tanks charges at him, Dark dodges to the right and just as he was about to use the force he was knocked of his feet by the blaster fire from the other tank. Before another shot was fired Dark got back on his feet and used the force to pull down a pillar and slightly crushed the tank. The first tank that charged came back around firing its missiles; Dark dodging its blaster fire, jumped into the air and used the force to push the missiles into different directions. The Apprentice then landed on the tank and used his lightsaber to destroy the turret his left. Once it was destroyed the other fired, but Dark deflected it and fiercely detached it. The tank was then about to fire its missiles at the ceiling, however Dark used force lightning to delay the fire. Dark using the force to grip the plating holding both missile launchers together; forcefully ripped it off the tank and throws it to the side. Dark jumped off the tank and used the force to push the damaged tank into the slightly smashed tank exploding on impact. Before Dark entered the next room he was getting transmission from Boba. Dark uploaded the signal with Boba as (blue) hologram saying “I have temporally disabled their communications you don’t have long I’ll meet you down …” All of a sudden Dark hears Kota “Stop! Intruder” and Dark then sees a hologram of Starkiller on the transmission. Dark hears an explosion in the transmission with Starkiller saying “He’s getting away!” then Kota angrily yells “After him!” and the signal was lost. Dark pressed on and made it to the door that leads to Vader’s cell, all of a sudden he’s force pulled away from the door. The Apprentice gets up off the ground and is confronted by Jedi Master (Von Rodan) and his Padwan (Odin Vantor). Dark ignites his double-bladed lightsaber and fights both the Master and the Padwan, even though the Master and Padwan are shocked that the enemy before them is Starkiller they prepare for battle. As the fight goes on with their clashing sabers Dark managed to kick the Padwan away and fight the Master. The Padwan then lifts his arms, and closes his eyes slowly uses the force on the demolished hand railings, opens his eyes and throws it at the Apprentice. Dark preoccupied by the Master’s vast amount of barrages with his saber was open and force pushed to the wall on impact. Dark’s lightsaber was forced out of his hands and rolled on the floor. The Apprentice stood up and dashed toward the Master, but as Dark was about to force pull his lightsaber charging at the Master; Dark was knocked off his feet by the tattered hand railing, and fell to the ground. Dark tried to stand but was pinned down by his knees. Before he could even summon his lightsaber he was held down by the force. With the Padwan using all of his strength held down the Apprentice. The Master reversed his lightsaber downward, and was about to execute the Apprentice; however Dark using his anger with his arms forcibly spread out summoned force lightning in both hands and managed to blast the Master away from him. The Padwan concerned for his Master lost concentration, and Dark blasted him with lightning allowing him to freely move. As Dark swiftly force pulls his lightsaber, ignites one side, and then charges at the Padwan preparing to finish him. Suddenly, the Master makes a courageous leap to save his Padwan, however Dark throws him with the force and dashes toward the Master. The Master tries to stand up, but he was to late Dark’s lightsaber already pierced through his chest. The Padwan filled with rage leaps toward the Apprentice, but is easily struck down and the Padwans head rolls on the floor (possible death change). Then Dark opens the cell and sees his Master, Lord Vader, strapped as if he were dead on an operating table. Dark senses that Vader has not awoken; The Apprentice then summons a medical droid to restore Vader's hand that was lost on the battle of Kamino. Suddenly, rebel forces arrived; the Apprentice takes out his double-bladed lightsaber and prepares to defend himself. All of sudden one of the rebels floats in the air as if being choked to death. Then Dark slowly turns his head and sees his master break out of his shackles (operation table). As Lord Vader rises slowly breathing, the rebels show fear and open fire. As Vader choked the rebel that was still floating, with a slow flick of his wrist the rebels were sent flying, dying on impact. Dark kneels before his master; the Dark Lord is pleased with what his Apprentice has accomplished, Dark then takes out Vader's lightsaber that he found on Kamino in a storage cell. Vader is pleased even further with Dark's progress. The Apprentice asks Lord Vader what his next mission is. Vader reveals that he was unable to turn the other clone, and tells the Apprentice to kill General Starkiller. Then Boba Fett reveals himself from the shadows and says “We should go more rebel forces will arrive soon…” As Boba walks away with his back turned he slightly turns his head saying “And I expect my payment when this is over.” Vader then tells his Apprentice to not fail him as he walks away with Boba separating from Dark. The Apprentice stands up and walks toward the other path way to make Vader’s get away simpler by diverting the rebel forces attention.
Mission 4 - General Starkiller and Kota arrive back at HQ after loosing sight of Boba during their pursuit; with the communications down and scanners jammed. Afterward they were being briefed by Juno on the situation discovering that this attack was not only by Boba but also from a mysterious hooded man trained in the darkside of the force. Kota and Starkiller then sense that the Master (Von Rodan) and Padwan (Odin Vantor) have fallen. They quickly make their way toward the hanger, but are being fired upon by their own men discovering that they are being manipulated through the force. Then Starkiller sees a shadowy figure cut across the corridor, and Starkiller chases after him with Kota following him. The shadowy figure still running gets past the door, and before it closes he pulls the ceiling down behind him blocking Starkiller and Kota’s path. Starkiller and Kota then take different routes in searching for the intruder, and sadly realizing that they have to kill their own men to get through; they are both unable to break the hold that controls them without destroying their minds. Starkiller makes his way through another squadron then gets a signal from Juno saying “Communication and scanner frequency within the station is back online.” Starkiller then sees the shadow of the figure cross the hall, but is suddenly force pushed back. The hooded man opens the sealed encrypted door, and jumps through. Then he uses the force to reseal the door. Kota then gets to Starkiller and they both open the door. They finally make their way one level above the hanger through the narrow hallway; suddenly the Dark Apprentice makes a surprise attack, throws Kota with the force, and advances his attack on Starkiller. Starkiller unable to see the intruders face gets hit with force lightning, and thrown to the side of the wall. The Dark Apprentice was about to stab Starkiller, but then Starkiller uses the force and pulls the Dark Apprentice toward the left, stabbing the wall. Starkiller then force pushed him, and he slides down the floor. As Dark got up he was about to charge at Starkiller, but was forced to block Kota who was behind him. Then just as Starkiller leaped toward the Apprentice, Dark got out of the clash with Kota’s blade, and as they both charged at him; Dark used force repulse pushing them both down opposite ends of the hallway. The fight ended in a draw; Starkiller and Kota stood on their feet on both sides of the hall, the rebels came in and surrounded The Dark Apprentice. Dark retracts his lightsaber, and reveals to Starkiller that he is a clone, but one with the darkside. As General Starkiller recalls a vision he had during his battle with Vader he remembers this evil counter part. The rebels are shocked, and slightly lower their guns. The Apprentice grins and makes a hole in the ground with his lightsaber, as he falls down the hole. He runs down the hall, and jumps in a spiral motion to dodge the two rebel soldiers’ blaster fire. Dark spirals in between them; uses the force to open the garbage chute, and gets through. Dark then force closes the door shut; Starkiller hits the door screaming "Nooo!" Starkiller then tells the rebels to get to the hanger. (When the Dark Apprentice is going down the garbage chute think of Episode 4 of where Luke, Leia, Han, and Chewbacca were in the garbage dump). As Dark lands at the bottom of the garbage chute the walls start closing in on him. Dark force repels the walls breaking the mechanism. The Apprentice makes his way to the door, and is found by more rebels. He runs and arrives at the hanger. He looks around the hanger and sees Boba and Vader entering Slave 1. Before Vader entered the ship he turns, and sees his apprentice making his way toward the ship. Then Dark and Vader turn toward the docking bridge, and see General Kota and Starkiller surrounding the docking bay. Vader looks at his apprentice giving a somewhat presence of a cold and faceless expression of disappointment. Vader then turns and enters the ship. Dark makes his way toward Slave 1, but realizes that he wasn't going to make it, and Slave 1 vanishes into hyperspace. Dark then defended himself with his double-bladed lightsaber, force repulses the rebels turning them into ash, and makes way toward the escape pods. However standing in his way were Starkiller and General Kota. As he fights them off he manages to push Starkiller and knocks Kota’s lightsaber out of his hands, meanwhile forcing him onto the ground. Before the Apprentice was about to end Kota's life Starkiller jumped in front and blocked the attack. As their sabers clash for a second time Dark tells Starkiller that he is weak and will grow weaker every day while Dark grows stronger with the force. Dark managed to catch Starkiller off guard but was thwarted by Kota’s interference. The Apprentice then runs toward the escape pod, and with Starkiller's last ounce of strength he used the force to grip the biggest piece of structure he could see; hurling it at the Apprentice. Dark then runs as fast as he could, and barely makes it in the escape pod with the structure blocking the hatch behind him he launches the pod to a random destination in the galaxy. Starkiller then looks out the docking bay, and sees the escape pod launch. Starkiller raises his fist; slams it on the ground fearing that he himself might actually be a clone, and being back under the hold of Vader’s iron grip.
While Juno and PROXY tend to the wounded; Starkiller and Kota discuss the situation onboard the station with the rebel leaders. Even though the situation was dire the leaders assign Kota to transport cargo from Mon Calamari to the Rebel base located on Yavin IV. Kota ends the transmission, and walks up to Starkiller. Kota asks Starkiller if he is willing to aid him on this mission. Starkiller hesitantly agrees and walks toward the Rogue Shadow.
As the scene changes to a space pod floating in space; Darth Vader appears on a small hologram projection saying to his Apprentice “Why have you contacted me when your task has not been completed?” Dark replies “There were… minor complications…” Vader interrupts “You were created to do my bidding! I will not tolerate such failures!” to which the Apprentice replies “Understood my master.” Dark ends the transmission, and changes the coordinates of the pod. The escape pod’s engines then go into a reverse motion.
Mission 5 - After Kota, Juno, Proxy, and General Starkiller obtain cargo from Mon Calamari the Rogue Shadow makes its way to Yavin IV. Then as they fail to communicate with the rebel leaders they discuss with each other what their plans are going to be, Starkiller notices that Kota is uneasy so he asks “Uh…Is there something wrong?” Kota looks back at Starkiller with a slightly suspicious look and replies “No…it’s nothing.” Starkiller turns his head away, and senses a disturbance in his mind, feeling alert. As they jump out of hyperspace half way toward Yavin IV’s system an imperial Star Destroyer cuts off their route. The Rogue Shadow turns in another direction trying to escape from the Star Destroyer. As they approach Rhen Var, Juno looks over at the planet and says states “That’s an imperial communications outpost.” Kota raises his voice and says “Turn back before…” but it was too late another Star Destroyer comes at them and cuts off their escape. Kota yells “I had a feeling something like this would happen” as Starkiller ignites his lightsabers, Juno looks at him, and shakes her head and says “There’s way to many of them, even for you” Starkiller then disengages his lightsabers, and Juno makes a landing on the planet. They land, get out of the ship to be greeted by thousands of stormtroopers pointing their weapons at them, along with 2 AT-ST, and are taken into custody. Then as they’re being taken away Starkiller looks over at a landing platform, the camera goes to the platform looks up at the sky and Slave 1 comes in for a landing, Boba fett walks out and sees them being walked into the base and Starkiller gets angry yet annoyed look on his face. They all look at a building which has 4 floors, were Starkiller will be held at it’s a part of a complex that wraps around the mountain. Rhen Var is under the control of Commander (Talus Broir); he takes their weapons, and tells the guards to take them away. Then a scene takes place with Starkiller chained to the wall (his torso his arms and legs) Starkiller notices that his grip on the force is weakening, he struggles with his thoughts, and tries to overcome his situation. Starkiller uses all of his strength; breaks his chains off the wall, boulders are flying toward the camera, and they crash at the entrance to his cell. The chains to his arms have boulders on the end of them, and he uses the force to throw the boulder attached to the chain on his left arm up through three floors of the building. Part of it breaks off when it goes through the first floor, more of it shatters when it goes through the second floor, and it shatters into pebbles when it hits the ceiling of the third floor. He then jumps up through the building, and uses force blast to go through the fourth floor where the Commander is. He cries for the guards to help him, three guards come bursting down the door; Starkiller uses the remaining boulder attached to his right arm, and throws it at the guards. It hits them, and the boulder crashes through the building wall falling to the ground. Starkiller force pulls one of his lightsabers ignites it, and frees his right arm. Two more guards came in and start firing. Starkiller blocks the bolts and kills them both. Then the commander attacks with his blaster; Starkiller then force pulls his other lightsaber, blocks it, and runs toward the hole. He jumps and force pulls Kota’s lightsaber at the same time falling back into the hole he made. As he lands back on the lower floor Starkiller sees imperial troops transporting PROXY to the other part of the base, but he was confronted by a AT-IC (All Terrain Ion Cannon) this is a prototype walker that is supposed to be faster than the AT-AT, but with a smaller ion cannon that can be used in battle, it should be around the size of an AT-ST. Note: mini-boss can be changed if you so desire it to be. After Starkiller dealt with the AT-IC he chased after PROXY while being delayed by storm troopers he managed to free PROXY. As he frees PROXY from his shackles PROXY replied “Ah Master I knew you would come for me I was afraid they would scrap me for parts and…” Starkiller then interrupts PROXY and says “PROXY focus! Where were Juno and Kota taken to?” PROXY pauses and replies “They were taken to other the other tower.” Starkiller then tells PROXY to go back to the ship and get a layout of the area. Starkiller goes off to free Kota and Juno. Starkiller makes his way outside, and PROXY then tells him that the tower is under maximum security. Starkiller sees the commanding officer escorting Juno into the tower. Then Starkiller makes his way through the courtyard; and as he makes his way to the tower, he hears two heavy blasters fire, and gets taken off his feet. He looks up and sees an AT-AT. The AT-AT fires again, but this time Starkiller evades the blast; ignites his lightsabers, and charges the AT-AT. Then the secondary weapon (Machine gun) fires at him (game play: Starkiller can either grab the head with the force by moving it up, down, left, or right, or just use force lightning to stun the controls for a brief amount of time. When the head shows sparks starkiller is able to move in on the one of legs and damage the cufflinks that connects the foot with the leg). As Starkiller destroys the cufflink from the front leg, he then throws his lightsaber toward one of the back legs which destroys that cufflink, and the AT-AT kneels down. Starkiller lifts the dismantled footpad with the force and throws it right at the face of the AT-AT and it explodes. Starkiller then goes through the tower door. PROXY then contacts Starkiller and says “Master these imperial documents I found indicate that General Kota is being held on the second underground floor. I suggest you use caution, because he’s heavily guarded”. Starkiller goes through each of the guards and as he arrives at Kota’s cell Kota asks “What took you so long?” Starkiller responds “Going through an Imperial base isn’t a walk in the park you know.” To which Kota responds “Well for a Jedi of your caliber I thought it would be.” Starkiller uses the force to break the cell door open and Kota steps out receiving his lightsaber from Starkiller. Starkiller tells Kota to rendezvous at the Rouge Shadow with PROXY. While Starkiller goes after Juno, Kota tells Starkiller “Juno was taken to the commander’s quarters” Starkiller stops for a moment and then presses on. Starkiller then calls PROXY and asks “PROXY can you search the base’s blueprints to find an alternative route to where the commander may have taken Juno?” PROXY responds “Of course master, give me a moment” as Starkiller wanders about PROXY says “Master, the commander’s quarters are located on the upper level of the base you may want to start there.” Starkiller makes his way to the upper levels slashing anyone who gets in his way, until he finally reaches the upper level. Starkiller walks in the room, and sees Juno being held at gun point by two stormtroopers along with the Commander looking out the window at the debris. The Commander says as he turns around “Lay down your weapons rebel scum or she dies.” Starkiller disengages his lightsabers; all of sudden Juno bashes the stormtrooper on her right, and sweeps the other trooper’s legs causing him to trip over. As the commander raises his pistol to kill Juno, Starkiller uses the force lifting up a stormtrooper that was trying to get up, and throws him at the commander. The commander was taken off his feet, banging his head off the wall, and was instantly knocked out. Juno then does a round house kick to stormtroopers face, forcing him to hit the wall which knocks him out. Starkiller then approaches her and frees her from the restraints. Starkiller then says “Let’s get out of here Kota and PROXY, are waiting.” Then just as they were about to leave; a crash was made through the window, and a thermal detonator rolls between Starkiller and Juno. Starkiller and Juno then jump in different directions as the detonator explodes. Boba Fett then appears through the smoke, and lifts Juno off the ground with her arms around her back. Starkiller grabs his lightsabers, but then Boba says “Don’t even think about it.” As the smoke clears Starkiller sees the predicament. Starkiller unsure of what to do Juno nods her head; Starkiller makes a worried yet agreeable expression on his face and nods in return. Boba looks at Starkiller with curiosity; all of a sudden Juno sharply turns her body out of firing range. Starkiller then force pushes Boba out the window. However just as Starkiller force pulls Juno back inside the room a fiber cord wraps around his right arm and pulls him out the window. As they are falling, Boba fires his blaster at Starkiller through the snow storm. Starkiller takes out one of his lightsabers with his left arm and blocks the blasts. As they descend down the mountain Boba uses his jet to swerve Starkiller around to catch him off guard. Starkiller then retracts his lightsaber and struggles to grab the cord. Starkiller succeeded, and managed to pull Boba toward him; he then grabbed Boba Fett’s face plate with the intention to drive him down to the ground. However, Boba managed to flip him over and get his legs in between himself and Starkiller thus pushing himself out of Starkiller’s reach. Boba then throws a thermal detonator towards Starkiller. Starkiller uses the force to grab the detonator and throws it back at Boba; however the blizzard blows the detonator across Boba Fett. The explosion damages Boba’s jetpack and as they swerve around and prepare for a crash landing toward an old circular room that was in ruins. Boba turns around and cuts the cord with his hidden vibro blade. Starkiller tries to use the force to make a smoother landing however due to malfunctions Boba’s jetpack fires a rocket in Starkiller’s direction. It blew about ten feet away from him and as Boba detaches his jetpack he rolls on the ground all the way to the circular room. Starkiller decelerates his fall using the force. He then ignites both lightsabers and leaps toward Boba’s direction prepared to fight. Boba fires at him with his rifle, Starkiller reflects the blasting fire all of a sudden Boba dodge rolls and leaps toward him. Boba ignites his flamethrower at Starkiller, Starkiller then force pushes the ground at his feet and propels himself across the room. Starkiller throws his lightsaber at Boba Fett, but Boba ducked, and as it circled around back to Starkiller, Boba Fett charged and dropkicked Starkiller. Boba charges and as he gets closer and closer to Starkiller, Starkiller rolled backwards, curled his legs just as Boba’s body was close enough, he kicked Boba into the air. Boba landed near the edge of the cliff. Starkiller approaches Boba on the ground, Starkiller points his lightsaber at his neck. Boba slowly stands up with his arms at the side of his head. Boba moves his right hand, points two of his fingers at his head and salutes Starkiller saying “So long.” he then falls backward off the edge. Starkiller failed to grab Boba before he fell; then turns around and walks away all of a sudden Boba Fett’s ship rose up and flies out of view. Starkiller then contacts PROXY and says “PROXY is Juno with you?” “Of course Master” PROXY replied. Starkiller said “Then pick me up at the rendezvous we’re done here.”
The Commander tells his administration to not report their escape; all of sudden a hooded figure walks through the door. The commander tells his administration to leave the room. The Dark Apprentice demanded “Where are the Jedi?” the Commander pleas “I am afraid they have escaped, but tell Lord Vader not to worry I have everything under con-“ (Choking sound) The Apprentice say’s “My Master will not be pleased with your failure Commander (Talus)” The commander, as he suffocates, pleads “Please…forgive…me” The Apprentice then grins wickedly turns around and as he walks away he hears snap of the Commander’s neck break.
The Rogue Shadow jumps to lightspeed, afterward they sent an urgent transmission to every Rebel transport. They were low on fuel, their cargo was still onboard, they hid it before they were taken on Rhen Var, and that they needed a full inspection on the ship for anything the Empire might have placed on the Rogue Shadow. A Dauntless class heavy cruiser picked up their transmission escorted them aboard. The Rogue Shadow was pulled into the cruiser via tractor beam, while on the cruiser Kota requested the admiral to give an audience with the rebel leaders, Starkiller told them about the inconvenience that had befallen them on Rhen Var. The Rebel leaders expressed their gratitude, told them that a group of their Bothan spies reported that Darth Vader’s Star Destroyer, The Executor, is being transported to Sluis Van to be completed. The rebel leaders requested that the Rogue Shadow should join the small squadron of elites that they sent to destroy the Executor. Starkiller looked at the task with anticipation because he thought that Vader would be on the ship, and he thought that this would be a good time to strike.
As the scene changes to the Executor, Vader is scene kneeling on the ground in front of him appeared a hologram of the Emperor. The Emperor says disappointingly “Your actions Lord Vader has made a significant blow to our forces” Vader implies “I was only trying to discover what they know of our plans…” Emperor angrily “And your efforts have been wasted due to your incompetence in failing to clone your former apprentice, leading to your unexpected downfall!” Vader sharply but slowly jerks his head up and the Emperor says “Yes… I know of your actions on Kamino…Did you not think I would not have known your defeat by your former cloned apprentice who now bares his arms at the Empire, along with his feeble rebelled friends.” Vader then reply’s “Do not worry my Master he will come to me and he will be destroyed.” the Emperor still speaking disappointingly at Vader says “I will see to no failures this time Lord Vader!” The hologram disappears, Vader stands up and a hooded figure comes out of the shadows asking “What’s our next plan of attack my Master?” Vader reply’s “Nothing has changed you will remain hear the rebels will come to us.” Scene ends.
Mission 6 - The Dauntless makes its way through hyperspace it arrives in the Sluis system and engages the attack on the planet in air space. While Kota commands the fleet on the front lines Starkiller heads toward the Executor. Juno manages to maneuver through the battle; however PROXY detected an incoming squadron of tie fighters and an unusual imperial star fighter. Starkiller then takes control he tells Juno to man the back guns while he takes the front and pilots the ship. Even though Juno shot down the tie fighters that unknown imperial fighter was gaining on them. Starkiller sensed something sturing in the force, he then knew who was piloting that ship. The Dark Apprentice has a clear shot and fires its guns; Starkiller sharply turns the Rogue Shadow and heads toward Sluis Van’s atmosphere. However, one of the shots fired managed to damage one of the engines Juno then returns to the controls and tries to guide the ship. As they make their way through the atmosphere Juno says “Everyone prepare for an emergency crash landing” PROXY then says “We’ll never make it, we’re coming in a speed that is beyond a survivable recognition” Starkiller then stands in the middle of the cockpit; closes his eyes, and uses the force to try and slow down the kinect energy of the ship. Even though the ship got past Sluis Van’s atmosphere Juno then says “Brace yourselves!” and the Rogue Shadow lands crashing into the surface. Even though the landing gear was active, the exterior of the Rogue Shadow was damaged along with one of its engines, but nothing critical. After they landed Juno told Starkiller that there were certain parts that were needed to fix the engine. The parts were small enough to be handheld, and that Starkiller would have to go through the Industrial factory, to find them. Then PROXY was getting a communication signal from Kota. Starkiller told PROXY to put him online. Kota speaking in distress “Starkiller what is happening where are you?” Starkiller replies “We crash landed on the planet.” Kota speaks “Well that’s unfortunate, but we can use this to our advantage…our troops on the ground need assistance in destroying the imperial factory since your ship is grounded help our troops while you can. We will hold off the air forces you just do what you have to…” An explosion erupted and the transmission ended. The transmission was cut off because the communications array was blown up. Starkiller then went to the battlefield while PROXY and Juno, salvage for parts. (Game play: Starkiller sees the battle and jumps off the cliff, and starts his assault aiding the rebels. Little by little the wind begins to pick up some sand making it harder to see battlefield. So the player will have to rely on the direction of the blaster fire. Here should be a new mini boss that’ll challenge gamers. After the boss is dealt with then the wind starts to die. When the wind dies down the factory is revealed. The rebels charge toward the factory doors, then rockets fire from the top of the doors and they blow away a few of the rebels. So Starkiller searches for a way up to destroy the cannons, he does and he heads toward it). Once he gets up top he destroys the cannons and the storm troopers using them. Once the cannons were destroyed, Starkiller jumps down, and opens the doors himself after more reinforcements arrive. They breach the factory, an alarm sounds off, and a voice from an overcome said “Breach at the main entrance, repeat breach at the main entrance all personal respond immediately!” As Starkiller goes through the factory he finds parts he needs for the Rogue Shadow, as he grabs the last part the entire factory starts to shake, and then a giant slug comes out of the ground then tunnels back underground. While the slug came out of the ground, Starkiller lost his grip on the last item, and it fell into the hole. As the slug goes back underground it takes a part of the factory with it. Starkiller then jumps in the hole after the slug; dodging rocks, and other things that come at him. Then as he’s falling he sees a rickety elevator and (Gamer must button mash) he lands on the elevator and it accelerated downwards uncontrollably. Starkiller defends himself from the rocks that are falling on him. Then the elevator abruptly spins put of control because it hit a huge piece of rock forcing Starkiller off the top of the elevator. He begins to see the bottom of the hole, and so, after he gains control of himself, he uses his lightsabers, and plants them into the wall to decelerate his speed. He pushes off the wall, ducks, and rolls as the boulders crash into the ground. As the dust clears Starkiller takes out his lightsaber to light his way, and sees couple of old lights that are low on power. Starkiller uses force lightning to regenerate the lights. Then just as Starkiller lit the lights he was attacked by a baby slug. As he is pinned down while holding it back he manages to throw it off him. While he gets to his feet the slug comes back around, and it jumps at Starkiller. Starkiller ignites his lightsaber and cuts it in half. As he fights his way through the mine he found the last part needed to repair the ship. All of sudden the giant slug appears fardown the tunnel, Starkiller then makes a break for it back up the tunnel. (Game play: As the Slug gains speed Starkiller uses the force to break the side of the wall to slow the creature down. Then as the Slug gets closer it opens it’s jaw, Starkiller then jumps and uses force push to gain speed and further distance from the Slug.) Starkiller then made it back the way he came, but it is collapsed. The slug then opens its jaws, and Starkiller jumps right into its mouth; ignites his lightsaber and stabs it in its pallet. The Slug then breaks through the boulder and turns upward. As Starkiller holds on to his lightsaber for dear life, the slug ascends to the surface. The slug bursts through the ground as it cries out in pain. Starkiller then swings off his lightsaber out of the slug’s mouth and lands on a cliff side. Starkiller watches as the slug descends back into the ground. PROXY then contacted Starkiller and says “Master can you here me...Master” Starkiller then replies “Yes PROXY I can here you and I’m returning to the ship.”
Starkiller arrives at the Rogue Shadow; Juno then appears and says “You’re back.” Starkiller then tosses the engine piece while saying “Here.” Starkiller then asks Juno “How long will it take for this ship to be up and running?” Juno reply’s “In no time at all.” PROXY then calls Starkiller in distress saying “Master scanners indicate an approaching star fighter heading this way” Starkiller’s heart then sinks and he shouts “Everyone back in the ship!” After PROXY and Juno got on the ship the star fighter appeared and just as Starkiller was making his way to the ship he was knocked off his feet by the blaster fire. As the ship comes back around Starkiller then grips the star fighter with the force. Even though he struggled to turn it, he managed to throw it in another direction. Starkiller then starts running away from the Rogue Shadow since he knows the ship is targeting him. Starkiller then approaches the edge of the cliff; as the ship prepares to fire, Starkiller uses the force to levitate a boulder, and hurls it at the star fighter. The Dark Apprentice then jumps out of the star fighter just before it collides with the boulder. As the Dark Apprentice falls, he clashes his lightsabers with Starkiller’s. As the fight rages on the Dark Apprentice clashes his saber with Starkiller again; then as they both back away from each other Dark spins around, and jumps down smashing the ground with his lightsaber using the force to make the edge of the cliff collapse. As Starkiller is just about to fall he force pulls the Dark Apprentice with him. As they’re nearing the bass of the ground the giant slug bursts from the ground. Starkiller and the Dark Apprentice then used the force to push each other in order to avoid entering the Slug’s mouth. They both land on the ground and prepare to fight two opponents at once. (Game play: Starkiller must attack the worm in order to complete this stage of the fight. The Dark Apprentice will help the Starkiller defeat the worm, but he’s still going to Starkiller.) The Dark Apprentice jumps on top of the slug and damages it while sliding down its back. The Dark Apprentice then jumps off and lands near Starkiller. As the worm is about to attack them they both jump into the air dodging the attack. However, while in the air the Dark Apprentice force grips Starkiller throwing him back down and force pushes him further to the Slug’s hole. While The Dark Apprentice lands on the cliff, he makes an evil grin and walks away. Starkiller being propelled managed to grab the rim of the hole, the slug prepares to make another attack. Starkiller then leaps out of the hole just before the Slug got him. (The fight continues with Starkiller hurling boulders at the creature.) The slug enraged charges at Starkiller, with his mouth wide open, descends upon Starkiller from above. Starkiller charges his force lightning while he’s waiting. The slug nearing Starkiller, Starkiller launches his attack and ignites the slug’s internal organs. (Note: through game play lightning will be useless on the slugs’ exterior.) The slug then crashes and falls at the side of Starkiller. Then Starkiller sees the Rogue Shadow descend down toward him. Starkiller feeling surprisingly exhausted from the battle, Juno comes out of the ship and helps Starkiller on board.
Scene: Space battle rages on showing the destruction of a Star Destroyer and a rebel ship. The Rogue Shadow appears and flies into the Executor’s hanger bay; Starkiller makes way hoping for rebel reinforcements to arrive. As imperial forces arrive; a drop ship crashes into the hanger, and as the door opens General Kota steps out deflecting all blaster fire in his direction along with rebel troopers charging out from behind him. After they clear the hanger area, Starkiller says with a sigh of relief “You’re alive?! I thought you were dead!” To which General Kota responds “I won’t die on a fool’s errand boy!” A couple of rebels defend the Rogue Shadow along with Juno, while Starkiller, PROXY, and Kota engage the command center.
Mission 7 - Starkiller, Kota, and PROXY make their way toward the command center, they realize Vader was no were to be seen. Starkiller, and Kota may not have been able to sense Vaders presence but they sensed an even stronger presence in the force. A door opens and the Dark Apprentice leaps toward Kota and Starkiller while PROXY scrambles to find the information revealing the location of the Death Star. As PROXY finds and downloads the location in his storage unit, Dark force repels Starkiller and Kota. As Dark is about to finish Starkiller, Kota force pulls him through the door he came and closes it, but only temporarily for it won’t hold the Apprentice for long. Kota then tells Starkiller to take PROXY and head back to the Rogue Shadow while he holds off the Apprentice as long as he can until they escape. Then an argument is set with Kota and Starkiller saying that no one should get left behind. Then the sealed door bursts open with the Apprentice about to strike. Kota then says "No time to argue, go now!" he then force pushes Starkiller and PROXY out the door and seals it saying "Do not let my sacrifice be in vain.” Starkiller then runs to the sealed door and yells, "Kota!" as he slams the door with his fist. Starkiller takes a slow deep breath and tells PROXY that they should get back to the Rogue Shadow. (End of the level is the fight with Dark vs Kota.) Dark clashes his saber with Kota and says "You are fool old man" and Kota remarks “At least I’m a fool who will die on his feet.” The fight was excruciating for Kota as he was trying to hold his ground against the Apprentice. As Starkiller makes his way to the Rogue Shadow he sees Kota fighting with the Apprentice through the shield door. Kota again clashed sabers with the Apprentice; however Dark managed to get the better of Kota and stabbed him through the chest. However with one final bout Kota stood his ground making the Dark Apprentice frustrated and said "Face it old man hope is lost. You have lost! Your rebellion will dwindle and fall!" then Kota with his dying breath and his last ounce of strength reply's "Hope...hope will always be their… for those who are willing to fight for it!" Kota slightly turns his head and senses Starkiller watching from the hanger. Kota then turns his head at Dark and says “Hope to the Rebellion!" turns his lightsaber upside down and just before he smashes his lightsaber to the ground making a huge force repulse he screams with his last war cry "HOPE TO THE TRUE REPUBLIC!" The windows in the room burst open and Dark is trying to hold himself with his lightsaber from getting sucked out into deep space. Kota’s body gets sucked out into space and just as Starkiller gets into the Rogue Shadow, Dark's lightsaber slips through his fingers, but he was saved thanks to the emergency air locks. As the scene gets to Kota's body the Rogue Shadow opens its door and Kota's body drifts right in. Then the scene takes place at a gathering of rebels making a Jedi funeral honoring the death of General Rahm Kota by lighting his body on fire making him one with the force. Starkiller feels sad, depressed, and enraged for the death of his Jedi mentor. After Juno tries to ease his pain Starkiller went to meet the Rebel Leaders and demanded that they take the fight to the Empire. The Rebel leaders denied Starkiller his request for they were not ready to take on the Emperor's mass destroyer without even knowing how to defeat the Death Star. Starkiller then persuades the Rebel leaders in letting him infiltrate the Death Star and stealing the Death Star plans with a small rebel fleet, but was denied until Princess Leia decided to aid Starkiller and got the Leaders consent to approve his infiltration.
Mission 8 – Tantive IV and the other three cruiser ships jumps out of hyper space in front of the Death Star. While Leia's fleet holds the attack; Starkiller infiltrates the Death Star along with PROXY. While Juno and the remaining rebels hold out in the hanger Starkiller and PROXY make their way through the station. Starkiller tells PROXY that they need to take different routes and pulls up a basic schematic of the Death Star on their position. Starkiller points to two different routes that they will take and the position that they will rendezvous at. PROXY then says “Understood Master, but how will I get to the rendezvous point without getting detected” Starkiller replies “Don’t worry PROXY I’ll take of it I’ll create a distraction to divert their attention, all you have to do is stay hidden and plant the explosives.” Starkiller and PROXY then part ways. Starkiller makes his way toward the barracks the officers pull out their blasters and fire. Starkiller deflects the blasting fire and more stormtroopers walk into the room. Starkiller throws both of his lightsabers at the troopers and then force lightnings his lightsabers striking down the troopers as their stunned by the electric shock. Starkiller then makes his way toward the rendezvous and seeing PROXY come out of his partly damaged hologram disguise. PROXY then says “Ah Master I planted the bombs just as you instructed, here’s the detonator” Starkiller grabs the detonator from PROXY’S hands and puts it into his coat pocket and says “Thank you PROXY, but were not done yet.” As Starkiller and PROXY go through the door they end up in the control room for the super laser. The engineers get off their seats and pull out their blasters, but then Starkiller lifts them off the ground and throws them off the platform. PROXY then searches through the control panel and finds the Death Star plans. However just as Starkiller and PROXY were about to make their get away the door they came through closes and another door opens and Darth Vader appears. Looking for another way out Starkiller realized that this may have been a trap set by Vader. All of a sudden Dark walks through the door behind them. Then Starkiller tells PROXY to get out of here and sends him flying through the door just before it shuts. He then tells Juno to pick up PROXY and that he was staying behind, he then turns off his communicator. Then Vader tells Starkiller "As I said once before as long she lives I will always control you..." Then Dark says "They will fall like the rest of your pitiful friends just as how the foolish old man fell before me." Starkiller replies "I’m disappointed that Kota didn't take you with him, however I'm glad that I get a chance… to avenge him myself!" Starkiller clashes with Dark then Vader says "You will not escape this time my apprentice" as he hurls various floating objects at Starkiller. Starkiller dodged and cut through most of the floating objects in his direction then as he force pushes Dark nearly off the platform having him hold on to the hand railing. Starkiller then leaps toward Vader, but Vader force gripped Starkiller and threw him to the ground. Starkiller quickly got up from the ground and dodged Vader’s thrown blade. As the sabers continue to clash making sparks in the air Dark leaps from the railing and charges at Starkiller. Starkiller barely managing to fend off against Vader and Dark; Starkiller managed to get out of their hold. As Starkiller slowly backs away he sees a spark in one of the control panels; Starkiller summoned a bolt of lightning out of his finger tips at the panel generating an electric field. Starkiller aimed the field at Vader and with him being stunned by the electric shock the Dark Apprentice charges at him, but Starkiller force pushes him out of the way. He then forced an escape route and ran down the corridors. Mean while PROXY makes his way toward the ship; he gets damaged by the blaster fire that's behind him Juno and the remaining rebel troops try to help PROXY and as they get PROXY on to the ship the small rebel squadron stay behind while Juno takes PROXY back to Tantive IV. As the Rogue Shadow enters Tantive IV’s hanger Juno tries to escort PROXY to the extraction, however she can’t help but worry for Starkiller. PROXY then tells Juno to go to him and she takes him up on the offer and gives PROXY to two droids that appeared at perfect timing. PROXY then leans on the gold droid as Juno runs back to the Rogue Shadow the droid says "Madam where are going... I'm a human cyborg relations unit not a medical droid engineer... how rude… um excuse me sir are you are alright?" PROXY then takes out a small microchip from his chest containing the data that they obtained and gave it to the small droid. C-3PO ask "R2 what are you doing...mission you were not on a mission...dying message…R2 sometimes I can never understand what you’re doing." Then PROXY's power shuts down and C-3P0 says "Oh my!" Scene gets back to Starkiller running down the corridors, all of a sudden he feels a change; his heart races and his insides are screaming and he’s kneeling on the floor. He feels his power growing weaker, but realizes he has to keep moving thus pushes on. Suddenly, he is force pushed through a wall by Vader, but the room Starkiller ends up in is in the Emperor’s Chambers, and all of a sudden Starkiller hears an evil laugh that echoes in the room. As Vader and the Dark Apprentice enter the room the Emperor walks down a staircase from his throne saying “Yes Lord Vader finish him and end this foolish predicament that has delayed us and then prove your loyalty to me by disposing your monstrosity of an apprentice.” Starkiller barely able to stand prepares to fight then the Rogue Shadow closes in above, the Emperor grabs it with the force and crashes it down. Starkiller acted fast and used what strength he could to use the force pulling Juno out of the hull; then as she falls, Starkiller uses the force to catch her. Then the ship comes crashing down and the explosion from the ship blasts Vader across the room. Starkiller shields Juno from the blast. As the flames die down Starkiller turns around showing that he is now an old man (Note: costume from Force Unleashed 1). He places (the unconscious) Juno on the ground and notices that her legs are scorched from the explosion of the ship. Starkiller waves his left hand that seems to be simmering and blows out the small erupted burns with the force. Starkiller then gets to his feet and shakes of his left hand blowing out the soot from his sleeve and turns around to face his final confrontation with his evil counter part. Dark force lifts a small wreckage of the ship and hurls it at Starkiller; however Starkiller grabs it and sends it back at Dark. Dark ignites his double-bladed lightsaber and cuts through the object Starkiller then dashes at him igniting both of his lightsabers in his hands clashing with Dark’s blade. Then as they repeatedly swing and block each others blade they both blast each other with the force. As soon as Dark lands on his feet he dashes at Starkiller. Starkiller gets up off the ground and sends a volley of force blasts at Dark, however the Apprentice dodges left and right away from the blasts. Starkiller then spins and smashes his blade to the ground full of force lightning; Dark then jumps in the air and clashes sabers with Starkiller, but manages to force him fall back a few steps. Dark then fills his body will electricity and shoots out a vast amount of lightning at Starkiller. Starkiller reflects the blasts with his sabers then steps further toward the Apprentice. The Apprentice quickly recovers from the electric shock and defends against Starkiller’s swing. Dark backed away after their sabers clashed again and this time when Starkiller leaped at the Apprentice, Dark grabbed him with the force nearly choking him and smashed him to the ground. Dark then ignited one part of his lightsaber and tried to stab Starkiller but Starkiller rolled to his left dodging the blade. Starkiller then uses a powerful force lightning attack and sends Dark flying out of the room. Starkiller believing he had won the fight waltz toward Juno, but then he was force pushed and Juno opens here eyes. As Starkiller gets back up to his feet he turns around and sees the Dark Apprentice. Dark then summons small parts of the ship using the force surrounding Starkiller within it, and firing a bolt of lightning conducting an electric cage around Starkiller. Starkiller struggled, but managed to surround himself with the force and repelled the objects away from him. Starkiller then falls down on one knee, looks up and sees Juno trying to stand. Suddenly, her hands moved toward her neck and Juno levitates a few inches off the ground. The Apprentice with his right hand choking Juno brings her toward him and says disgustingly “Pathetic!” as Juno levitates on Dark’s side he continues “You care for this women well then lets see if you can save her.” The Apprentice then hurls Juno across the room Starkiller sceaming “No!!” uses the force and sets her back on the ground. Starkiller then quickly ignites his lightsabers, but gets them knocked out of his hands by the Apprentice’s swing. The Apprentice then kicks Starkiller with enough force to send him off the ground ending up next to Juno. Then Starkiller quickly gets in front of her and just as the Dark Apprentice is about to make the finishing blow, a red lightsaber pierces through his chest. The Dark Apprentice slowly turns around after the saber disengages barely able to stand he grips his lightsaber with his left hand while his right hand covers his chest. The Dark Apprentice eyes widen and asks "What trickery is this?" for what is standing before the Dark Apprentice, Starkiller and Juno is Darth Stalker (Note: This is what I call Starkiller in Force Unleashed one because it sounds a lot better than sith stalker armor or Lord Starkiller). The room echoes with the Emperors laugh, he then says "There is no trick of what’s standing before you boy...This is the true power of the dark side...Vader thought he could keep his cloned apprentice a secret from me. However, I traveled to what was left of Kamino’s cloning facility... and found his former apprentice lay wasted among the ruin. I decided to revive him as a monument to Vader’s mistakes that should not transpired…He will do my bidding until I find a more suitable replacement...And now my apprentice dispose of them!” Stalker replies “Yes...my...Master." The Dark Apprentice charges at Stalker, but Stalker gets behind the Dark Apprentice and stabs him in the chest a second time then spins cutting off the Apprentice’s head. Then as Stalker approaches Starkiller and Juno who lie on the floor next to one another; something stirs in Stalker as he lifts Starkiller off the ground. Suddenly, memories of Starkiller’s adventures travel in Stalker’s mind as if they were connected through the force. The memories erupted within Stalker from deep within as if from a previous life combining with new memories of the Starkiller before him. This confuses Stalker as he drops Starkiller he puts his hands on his head as if in pain. Stalker then slowly looks up at Juno and memories of her come into his mind bringing a warm feeling over him. Suddenly, he hears her voice but he also hears the Emperor.
Lightside Ending - Stalker tries to pursue Juno's voice, he moves his left hand and grips his oxygen mask. Although he struggled he managed to rip it off and what was revealed behind the mask was a pale white face. He appeared with red marks from the top of his head splitting down to the tip of his eyes and a scar appearing on the corner of his left eye. Although his eyes reveal to be a blood red color his face revealed to be that of the original Starkiller. As he falls to his kneels he says "Juno." Then a lightning bolt strikes his back and he hears Emperor yell "You fool you betray me just as your former master once before!" Sends another lighting bolt at the real Starkiller who tries to block it, but is to weak to fully reflect it do to his irregular breathing. As smoke rises from his body he falls back on Juno and she then holds him tight, then the Emperor remarks and says "What shame! I was hoping you prove to be of use to me. How disappointing! Now you will die as you were before!" The Emperor sends the finishing blow… all of a sudden the cloned Starkiller jumps in front of the lightning blast and saves the real Starkiller. The Emperor enraged walks toward the old clone and levitates him throwing him back down on the ground. The Emperor then tries to finish him with force lightning for his interference. The original Starkiller seeing an opportunity throws his lightsaber at the Emperor and force pulls the clones blue lightsabers toward his hands and attacks the Emperor. The Emperor whips out his lightsaber blocking the floating red saber’s projectile, but drops the clone. The Emperor destroys the red blade and blocks Starkiller’s attack. As their sabers clash together creating sparks in the air the Emperor said “You could have made such promise… Now you will pay for your treachery.” Starkiller remarks “Its time I finish what I started.” The Emperor replies “What you have started ended failure boy!” As they both back away from each other the Emperor uses the force to grip objects from the room and hurls them at Starkiller. Starkiller jumps over one of the objects and slices through the other. Suddenly, Starkiller gets blasted with force lightning from the Emperor. The Emperor walks toward Starkiller, and blasts a ferocious amount of force lightning; Starkiller blocks the attack with his hands, and as he stands on his feet he steps closer to the Emperor. With the clone’s last act as he lay on the floor he takes a device out of his coat pocket; hits the ignition button igniting the small detonation bombs that PROXY planted in the facility. As the place shakes an explosion blasts the Emperor’s Chambers, fire spreads and the original Starkiller moves his right hand using the force to pull the Dark Apprentice’s lightsaber toward him with what strength he had left. Starkiller ignites the blade on both sides’ spins and throws it at the Emperor. The Emperor unable to undo his force lightning generates the blade that hurls toward him. The Emperor stunned in fear watches the blade spin toward him; suddenly, Vader appeared from a small buried ruble. Vader swings his right arm up, and uses the force to pull down the electrocuting double-bladed lightsaber out of the Emperor’s direction. However, with the blast from the explosives entering the room; the shock wave from the explosive combining with the electric lightsaber made a small explosive blasting the Emperor across the other side of the room. The original Starkiller with smoke still rising from his body (dissipating) he waltzes toward Juno kneeling next to her he says "Juno." Juno looks at him and as she hugs him she says "Galen." As they share their final kiss they were engulfed by the flames. A small explosion can be seen out side the exterior of the Death Star and the crew on Tantive IV knew of what became of Starkiller and Juno. Then as the flames died down a hole can be seen in the ground in the middle of the Emperor’s Chamber; a cold breath chills the room. Vader appears along with the Emperor at the edge of the hole; they look down and see a pile of ruble believing it to be on top of Galen and Juno’s body. As Vader is about to leave the Emperor tells him "This boy even in death became our undoing...Lord Vader go and hunt down the Rebels that flee before us!" Vader reply’s "Yes my Master" Emperor then remarks "Oh! And Vader" Vader reply’s "Yes" Emperor finishes in a cold icy tone "Never try to betray unless you have the will to finish me yourself!" Vader just walks away. Then Leia makes a speech to here crew holding the data R2 gave her “We will honor those that have died…who sacrificed their lives to give us a dawning of a new day and for giving the rebellion a New Hope!” The end
Darkside Ending - Stalker is about to strike the clone, suddenly Vader throws his lightsaber at Stalker which nearly took Stalkers right arm, the clone then force pulls his lightsabers, but gets easily struck down by Stalkers fast reflex. Then as Stalker is about to finish him Juno jumps in front of Stalkers swing crying out “Don’t lose yourself….Ga…len” as Stalker retracts his lightsaber through her body he holds Juno in his arms as he kneels down and screams “Noooo!!” he puts her on the ground and feels enraged. As rage consumes Stalker he lifts the clone and as he watches as the clone suffocates to death by force choke Stalker says breathing angrily “You did this to her! This is all because of you!” As the clone tries to desperately to gasp for air he managed to take out the remote detonation device, but just as he was about to push the button Stalker ignites him with a bolt of lightning. As smoke rises from the old clone’s body he drops the device and then the clone falls to the ground. The clone’s eyes barely able to see tries to reach for the device, but is crushed under Stalker’s boot right before the clone’s eyes. Then as the clone looks up and sees Stalker’s mask, he dies. Stalker then looks around the room for Vader, but then realizes Vader is no longer there, Stalker being blinded with rage turning his head at every corner of the room starts screaming “Nooooooo!!!!” as the room becomes engulfed in Darth Stalker’s force energy. The Emperor pleased with Stalker’s power grins, and as Stalker cooled down the Emperor said “You have done well! Now you will go and dispose of the rebels and Vader for their treachery against the Empire!” Stalker reply’s coldly “Yes…my Master!” Stalker then blindly gives his loyalty to the Emperor and he heads out toward the galaxy to hunt for Vader, and making Juno’s last words die in vain.
Darkside DLC continuation - Stalker located Vader on Cloud City, Bespin and his ally is his apprentice Luke Skywalker who he turned on Hoth; are now hunting down Vader. However near the end of the level during the boss fight with Vader Luke betrays Stalker and teams up with Vader making the boss fight against Luke and Vader (needs more detail and after Stalker kills the clone change can be made to what happens to Vader on the darkside ending).
Now that I have finished telling my story I want to tell the main points that I want to see happen for Starkiller. First off is that his body is degenerating due to his massive control over the force his body ages rapidly, however this does not impact game play, only story unless the developers can figure a way it can work with game play. The way I want him to look is how he looked old in the Force Unleashed 1 DLC costume. Furthermore as I already put in the script The Dark Apprentice clone has a double-bladed lightsaber like Darth Maul, however I would like maybe in game play to switch from double-bladed to single bladed lightsaber during combat to smooth out the balance of the game. Note: the good Starkiller clone can only use two (reverse grip) lightsabers (one lightsaber in both hands). This is the last game play idea I could think of for force powers please: let gamers have force choke for Starkiller, I have been dying to use and anticipated using force choke! Also the names I gave for the two new Jedi and the Imperial Commander was not decided until later on in time. I tried thinking of unique names that may fit in the Star Wars Universe. I originally was not going to give them names at all, but I just did as an example that is why they are in parentheses. The name I gave the Jedi master Von Rodan was a name I was going to use in the Old Republic, but I decided to use it on this character for I found him to be noble and a master swordsman along with him being able to be adapt to dangerous situations. Also the name Odin Vantor made a perfect fit as a Padwan companion for Von Rodan. The only background I can give for these two characters is that Odin Vantor is strong in the force and was going to become a Jedi Knight, however he was unable to for Order 66 was active and the Purge on the Jedi temple began. Von Rodan came back to the Jedi temple and saved Odin during the raid on the Temple. Von took Odin under his wing and with their escape from the temple they hid themselves from the Empire. As they stayed hidden in the galaxy they heard rumors of an uprising rebel force fighting against the Empire. Von and Odin made their way through the galaxy searching for this rebellion and found Rahm Kota who gladly welcomed them to the alliance. That is the only background I can give on those two Jedi, as for Commander Talus Broir I really do not think he needs that much of a background except that he is the Commander of the outpost base on Rhen Var. His characteristics, however I would imagine for him to be rash and overconfident. The characters during the alliance meetings the rebel counsel leaders were the same ones who started the rebellion. I believe those political characters are still leading the alliance: leaders such as Bail Organa, Mon Mothma, Bel Iblis and Leia Organa (Note: I did not add Admiral Ackbar because I thought the way he was portrayed in Episode VI was well done, thus did not need to be shown in this game for there was no need for his character and I was not sure if I need his character at all. If I did add Ackbar the story he would only be in the meetings with the rebel council.) Also there may be other rebel leaders that I am unaware of during the time period before the Battle of Yavin IV. (Note: I had complications with some parts of the story such as the arrest with Starkiller and the situation on Rhen Var.) In addition I have another idea on how the darkside ending should be portrayed. The two alternative ideas I have for darkside ending (besides the one that is already written) still goes the same way on how the clone dies. However, the first alternative after the clone dies is having Stalker attack the Emperor out of rage and either he kills the emperor and joins Vader. The second alternative is to have him killed by the Emperor and Vader continuing to the next movie making the story continue in a dark way to continue toward Episode IV. Also I have a DLC idea for only Force Unleashed 2 (not Force Unleashed 3) due to a certain time frame and it has to do with Starkiller fighting Maulkiller and it can only happen in a certain time frame when Starkiller picks up General Kota on Malastare.
This is the entire story I have had in my head I hope you enjoyed the ideas and would use it in Force Unleashed III because I would like to see my vision come to life. In addition I have put a lot of effort into this script and this was not easy to accomplish. I had to update this script daily and really think on the reasons why the situations turned out as they did. I had to really explore the Star Wars Universe in order to complete this project for I needed lots of details. I had to scrap some ideas that just did not work for example: the arrest with Starkiller changed (Note: that was probably the most difficult scene to fix.) and I changed the original planet idea from Fondor to Sluis Van due to an issue in the Exucutor’s completion. The script may have a few errors that I missed or just did not notice, but I have never pushed myself this hard in my life nor do it willingly on my own without being told. Even though it was a difficult task I had a lot of fun writing this Force Unleashed story for it may have improved me in getting to know myself better. In addition to some talent and critical thinking I may have never noticed in myself before. (Note: If there are any scenes that need to be explained I would gladly give an explanation on why that scene was portrayed). Furthermore I would like to discuss more about this game in getting it made along with the story plot and time frame to match, with one of the writers, directors, producers or any one in Lucas Arts production people or whoever reads this please tell me what you think!
Written By Michael K. Reynolds