some of you're ideas are pretty cool - specially gameplay and bosses
Here's how I make it though planet range might diverse...
Fot me they can never reach Dantooine for it is the abandoned hidden rebel base the imperials find and Tarkin decide to blow up Alderaan.
so my story in general follows
let me know what you think
1
Juno and Starkiller leave Kamino... Fett follows
Meanwhile Vader's apprentice comes out of hiding and releases his master:
"The plan is in motion,,, now we will know the location of the rebels' secret base"
Vader kills all rebel troops and confronts Kota which is killed.
Act 2
Starkiller however isn't going to Dantooine... He plans to revisit a little green friend on Dagobah for he feels there's more to him than meets the eye.
But when they come out of Hyperspace Fett jumps on them and fires against the Rogue Shadow.
Juno and Starkiller realize they've been followed and need help but can't risk exposing the Rebellion
Boba Fett realizes his attack was precocious and warns Vader
Vader warns him that failure is not an option.
Juno and Starkiller make a desperate jump to a nearby planet where allies can be found and they can repair their ship: first to Sullust and then Naboo - check the galaxy map
Starkiller lands on Theed knowing that the local government does not support the empire. He must contact them and ask for help. He thinks he has lost the bounty Hunter but he has not.
Boba warns Vader
Act 3
Vader having sensed the odds of such an occurrence after Boba’s communication had dispatched a battalion from Geonosis to Naboo.
Starkiller fights his way through imperial troops only to find the Queen of Naboo had been murdered and a Moff had taken her place.
Starkiller defeats the Moff (bossbattle) but neglects to protect Juno who is captured by Boba Fett .
Starkiller sees Slave 1 leaving the planet
With Theed overrun and the Rogue Shadow lost Starkiller’s only way out is Otoh Gunga
Act 4
In Otoh Gunga he is taken to the current boss. He demands Starkiller to leave the city wanting no trouble with the empire.
Starkiller asks for a ship to leave but his request is denied. He is given an ultimatum: one day to leave Otoh Gunga or they would turn him to the Empire.
That night Kota comes to Starkiller in his Dreams and tells him not all is lost for he still has friends in the galaxy. He tells he should save the light in his heart for a darker hour approaching.
That same night Starkiller plans an assault to the starport in oder to retake the Rogue Shadow
Act 5
Starkiller manages to reach the ship but is stopped by Vader and a captive Maris Brood (captured by shadow guards on Felucia)
Vader tells her that if she can defeat Starkiller he would spare her and even take her up as his apprentice
(boss battle)
Maris seeing her power is lesser to Starkiller and realizing that the dark side would only be an even worse prison than Felucia asks him for forgiveness and turns on Vader giving Starkiller a chance to escape.
Maris is Killed by Vader.
Act 6
Starkiller leaves for Alderaan wondering if Bail might know where Juno might have been taken.
He tells him that he doen’s t knowbut might know someone who does: Jabba the Hutt.
Starkiller leaves for Tatooine
Act 7
When approaching Tatooine, Starkiller loses control of the Ship due to a sand strom. The Rogue Shadow falls. Surprisingly, Starkiller survives the crash but is injured. He crashed near a moisture farm and feels Vader’s presence but at peace… he doesn’t understand and feels confused and asks Kota for help. But he is only met with the presence of a young couple of farmers holding child by the hand.
They offer him aid and a ride in a turbocycle hoover to mos eisley. He thanks them and glances back at the young boy… knowing the future will never be the same.
- - In the mountain horizon an ageing Kenobi wonders who that might be - -
Act 8
Jabba’s palace.
Starkiller forces an audience with Jabba. Meeting does not go well but. Boba is present and asks for Strakiller’s arrest. He promises to split the bounty with Jabba. ButJabba wants it all to himself. Battle with several bounty hunters and rancors. Eventually it is Boba who helps Starkiller to escape but only because he’d prefer to let him escape rather than be captured by someone else.
Starkiller sees a chance to reach for Juno
He confronts Boba (boss battle)and wins. He has a deal for him. If he took him to Vader he could collect his reward and then leave. He had no quarrel with him. A mutual benefit for both.
Boba reluctantly accepts but warns him they can’t leave in his ship for “fellow” bounty hunters would be surveilling slave 1 trying to snatch the catch of the day from Boba.
Boba introduces Starkiller to a young merchant/gambler Lando Calrissian: he would take him offworld in the Millenium Falcon for a fee… Starkiller uses persuasion
But a dark hooded man (the apprentice) appears and gives chase to Starkiller.
After a fight that Starkiller loses, he is force to flee.
When all seemed lost the Millenium falcon appears flying next to Starkiller that with the help of force jump makes it to the entry platform… therefore escaping
ACT 9
The Millenium Falcon docks with Slave 1 on the arranged coordinates and starkiller pretends to be Boba’s prisoner… once he knows where they are going he smashes some of slave 1’s circuits and jumps back into the millennium falcon.
They fly to Corellia.
Act 10
In Corellia, Starkiller needs to infiltrate The Imperial Governor’s Hall.
Lando offers help and finds a young imperial cadet Han Solo that has been tempering with security access cards. Lando befriends Han which through some more force persuasion offers the clearance security cards.
Starkiller says goodbye to them both. Both are unaware and don’t realize the Force has messed up with their minds despite being strong willed…
Act 11
Starkiller pushes through the imperial building until reaching the top where Vader awaits with Juno in custody. As long as she lives I will control you…
From the Shadows the dark apprentice appears.
Who is he? –Starkiller asks
Vader - He is you… you are him… But he was first… you are but a replica… a clone…Kill him
Yes master – the dark apprentice replies.
But Juno stands in the way
To Starkiller –You can’t kill him! He is…you! He saved us all…H has just forgotten it… we can bring him back
Starkiller – Are you saying you believe this lie?
Juno –I don’t know what to think… but Vader is the only real enemy here…
Starkiller – Juno, stand aside….
Juno-I can’t…. I love him…you
Starkiller feels confused and is nearly losing it when he remembers Kota’s words. He holds on to the light and casts away all his demons. Be it true or a lie he must rescue Juno…
But in that moment the apprentice strikes Juno from the back (Vader style)… don’t hold back … brother…
Starkiller-Noooooooooooooooooooo…….
(battlebegins)
Starkiller wins with force lightning but is near death. He stands to fight Vader but the dark Lord cuts his Lightsaber in two… Starkiller kneels before him… feeling beaten and tired.
Starkiller- Is it true…? Am I a clone…?
Vader- Yes…. But infused with more force power than the original… It seemed however this made you resistant to the seduction of the Darkside as you clang to memories that were not your own. They were his (pointing to the deceased body of the real Starkiller).
Starkiller – Then it seems I have won…
Vader – Won?
Starkiller –Your cloning process is a failure… the rebellion is growing… and you can never again control me…
Vader stops to admire his total defeat.
Starkiller drags himself near to Juno’s body and holds her. He kisses her but her soul had gone to the force already.
Starkiller,coughing and nearly dying, turns to Vader:
I have seen your future. You will destroy the emperor.
Vader-Yes… I have forseen it.
Starkiller- You don’t understand… There’s still light in your heart
Vader- (breathes) no … it is…too late
Image fades to blackness
Starkiller’s voice- No I’ve seen it…
…….. him …
…
…
…and it shines bright!
Vader’s breathes heavily
THE END
kinda like this end cause it introduces hope though demonstrating vader's defeat and completing the circle... it seems grand and dramatically challenging in a director's point of view
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If you people at LucasArts like this... contact me for there is plenty more on developing this story - what is posted is only basic storyline